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Sestina

Sestina sounds romantic like a lazy siesta with a Latin lover. Foxy tanned skin and dreamy pools of irises. Words can confuse and taunt the innocent and simple mind. Words can turn vile and bitter after the romance has faded. Lovers become cold and distance, leaving an empty shell of A former grandeur, and burned out emotions that are unable To form a complete sentence. Dare I say poetic words that do not flow? When all hopes have been doused with ice... Do I dare revisit the sestina again? Hope beyond hope for a reunion of words and cohesive thoughts? Is it possible to have a poetic thought again? Old friend, my eraser, comes along on this adventure. When you reduce, my sestina will rise again from my thoughts!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2010 8:28:00 AM
I think that you did a good, commendable job on what is a demanding exacting form. You should be proud. Solid! Regards, and thanks! Gerard.
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:31:00 AM
Well don't give up Doris .. I just wrote another one this morning and its fun and challenging and its an interrupted flow by stopping in the middle of the next line... u will do great I know it... as this little poem today proves the talent u already had deep within..luv.. and enjoyed.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:23:00 PM
For my contest?? YEAH..... HeHe, good work my friend...:JP]
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Date: 5/11/2010 2:12:00 PM
Oh did I enjoy this one Doris~Written so well~quite clever~thank you for the dream~~Rick
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Date: 5/11/2010 2:03:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Love and romance is still there you just have to rekindle the fire..Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom
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