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Serenity

swimming thoughts disturb my peaceful sleep, scribbled on paper, brings peace...

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T.L. Drover

Date: 10/10/2010 10:21:00 PM

Love it! I can totally relate to this. So much said in so few syllables...great write!

James Fraser

Date: 10/8/2010 9:42:00 AM

I like it Wilma, terrific Senyru >> James

Joe Flach

Date: 10/7/2010 11:47:00 AM

Is this what has you up at 2400hr at nights? Why is it that my brain drowns when I am awake but swims like an Olympian when I sleep? Learn to write in your sleep to ensure you get plenty of rest. Loved the picture these so few words paint - and it tells me something about you ... cool. joe

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2010 6:38:00 AM

Oh yes, I know that feeling well, I I do not get up and scribble it down two things happen, I cannot sleep an two I forget it... you captured that feelin perfectly~~

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/6/2010 5:31:00 AM

Wilma loved this Haiku ... must be a comp in the air ? everywhere I go there is Haiku lol thanks for the comment on my poem it is appreciated love Jayne

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/6/2010 2:37:00 AM

self counciling. it works. my walls are full of writing and guess what? they talk back to me :-) Sorry in a funny sort of sad mood Love your poems Girlfriend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2010 9:13:00 PM

VEry lovely description for poetry! LUV, aNDREA

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/5/2010 2:58:00 PM

We all feel that, thats why we write and share our lives on paper or the laptop screen lol....so glad I get to read your thoughts and feelings today.... Love Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2010 1:59:00 PM

Been there..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...It is good to know that I am not the only one that has done that..Thanks for the comments on my blog..Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/5/2010 12:31:00 PM

As always, a very good habit to have, dear Wilma..that way you avoid the doubt that may come if you put it off.. Thanks for always reading and leaving comments for me. Hope you're doing well! Have a wonderful evening! Love, Audrey

Daver Austin

Date: 10/5/2010 10:40:00 AM

Amazing things happen. I once dreamt a piece of music - the entire peace - woke up, wrote it down, and published it. Thanks for reminding me of that special dream. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/5/2010 7:33:00 AM

Yes Wilma its the only way to release what wants to come out hidden deep inside.. u have expressed it beautifully in your Senryu lines today.. enjoyed dear friend with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/5/2010 5:26:00 AM

Swimming thoughts your peaceful sleep and the result is this nice Senryu, Wilma