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twilight … we met deep in silence no game-speak required 'neath a mist-mottled moon - the lush mood it inspired ... so drawn to each other like a magnet to ores a charred conflagration quick-melting our cores ... delved each other's eyes as we worked to enmesh our mouths and our souths through a blending of flesh … mixing feverish touches and tongues, tangy-hot our desires swirled deeper with our limbs tying knots ... and with chaos our compass we made perfect, our dance in a place where we’d found so much more than romance … thus our crime, in good time found sweet end, undeterred and with eve, took our leave - not one glance, not one word … such a scorching inferno such a fierce, torrid flame such an odd thing that you never asked for … my name. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "I'll Never Forget What's His/Her Name" Poetry Contest, John Lawless, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 5/24/2020 1:24:00 AM
Too hot to handle!! Congrats......
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very kindly, Barbara! :o) <3
Date: 5/21/2020 6:47:00 PM
Hello Gregory R. Barden, Are you sorry that you never asked her for your name? Just a question. have a nice evening my friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Darlene, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 10/2/2019 2:05:00 PM
...for passion always bears a pseudonym. Very nice take on he them Greg..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much, John, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Heidi, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 2:04:00 PM
A well-worded muse--entertaining! ~ Aloha always William
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much, William, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 1:45:00 PM
Yeah I knew it congrats G on another win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much, John, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win :) hugs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 1:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win Gregory!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Brenda, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 11:43:00 AM
'Greg, Congratulations on your win! Another outstanding write. David'
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much, David, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 11:08:00 AM
The meter is so fun with this subject! Great write as always! Congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much, PS, that means a lot to me - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy of comment. May blessings to you, my friend - stay safe and sound! :o)
Date: 9/23/2019 11:53:00 AM
Passions burn in this write G, hope it does well.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/24/2020 4:37:00 AM
Thank you very kindly, John! :o)

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