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On whispered breeze I hear your plea to feed Upon my form you wish to feast and dine I smile as I inhale desire’s need And know tonight you’ll taste of lover’s wine I stand before you now as I undress My fingers tease the buttons on my blouse Your eyes must touch before your hands caress Your lips now part from sight that does arouse I walk to you with swaying steps so bold My hair unleashed, it tumbles round your face Down on your knees, your tongue seeks navel gold And fingers reach above the curves to trace My hands go round your neck and pull you in I taste the lobe of ear and gently blow the words of want and need desire to win and whisper pleasured treats you soon will know I feel you tremble neath my roving hands You breath comes quick and knowing I lean in to tie your hands to chair with silken bands I take command of mouth and trace your chin I tip your head and then devour your neck Leave marks of ownership just where I please You rage against the chords as my lips trek the journey down below to taste and tease You call my name in throes of ecstasy I feel your panting breath against my hair This night is one of wanton revelry To satiate your needs is my affair Before the end of this our passion race I ride the waves of your euphoric greed You move to rhythm that I set to pace Until sweet time when pent up love is freed And now unleashed, you fall into my arms Upon my silken breast you lay your head I lull to sleep with all my sweetest charms As moonbeams blanket us upon our bed Jade ;) Celeste

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 1:36:00 AM
Wow Eileen my friend... passionate .. sensuous... your romantic verse tends to transcend a person to an entirely different world.... you should try your hand in writing a novel... lov n hugs, nad
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/16/2015 2:12:00 AM
I have already written a few chapters of a book entitled, The Broken Man. I started when I was fifteen and in my mind it's already a movie! ;) We can dream. It's about how the love of a woman can bring a strong man to his weakest point. I love this theme. I might finish it one day. I must rush. I'm in between classes. Came to print out a poem for my students. Carpe Diem dear. Hugs
Date: 3/15/2015 9:35:00 PM
Very nice romantic write.. I enjoyed the read..
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 11:54:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Ken. I'm glad to know you passed by.
Date: 3/15/2015 8:30:00 PM
Ownership of a heart's most desperate orgasm, spoken on the rhythm of ruthless passion..."Until sweet time when pent up love is freed..." such a pleasure to be bound to your conquest Eileen...the finish under moon beam blanket is beautiful too...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 11:56:00 PM
Justin...so good to "see" you. I've missed your visits, Eagle. I have. Yes....I do like to conquer...and be conquered. However, perhaps I find more joy in knowing my power to bring my loved one to the point of surrender to fulfill a desperate need. There is sweet victory in that...it's euphoric. Thank you for visiting me. You know how I value your words. :) Soar, Eagle. Soar....Beloved Poetess
Date: 3/15/2015 7:32:00 PM
My wonderful Enchantress you are the queen of true romantic love, so seductive so beautiful so passionate. A woman who wants to pleasure her lover in the way she decides, controlling, tempting, teasing! Your writes are truely brilliant because they are manifest through your true passion and love. You are the most sensuous woman I have ever known. 7 as always and a favourite for me. love Shane xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/16/2015 12:04:00 AM
:) Shane, this is lovely praise, indeed. I will treasure it. Thanks ever so much for seeing me in this light. It brings me pleasure. Yes, passion is my heartbeat. The lens through which I view life. I'm passionate about everything...even music and food. ;) I make funny noises when I eat and my daughter tells me off. Mmmmmmm....so good often escapes my lips when having a decadent desert. What can I say? Passion and love rule! You can never have too much. However, this also has a downside. However, happy thoughts for now...I'm off to a day of teaching where I tell my students to be passionate about what they write and feel. I drew a tree on the whiteboard and said. "what do you see?" Write something creative. Then I read to them Joyce Kilmer's poem...Trees. A tree has beauty...be passionate about nature...the sun the moon...all speak. :) We have to listen...Hugs
Date: 3/15/2015 3:26:00 PM
Wow!! Fantastic poem full of sensuous imagery. Everything about this poem is sexy - the voice, the atmosphere, and the psychology of the two. I love how you end with sweet release. Very masterfully written. As always! Always, Laura
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, sweet Laura. I'm pleased that you liked this write. I really enjoyed the flight of fancy it took me on. :) I'm please your visit. Hugs, sweetie.
Date: 3/15/2015 3:14:00 PM
Wow! Eileen! You gave lovingly and passionately. It was not just your hair that you unleashed! When you give you give your all...but knowing you, you are 'patiently' waiting for reciprocation...in full! Top marks, as usual:) Hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2015 4:56:00 AM
Incognito!! Easy to hide behind a name, but not easy to hide the style:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 4:24:00 PM
Oh Paul...my nature is my nature. I know this might have been a bit over the edge...I push the envelope as far as I can. That's why the name change...I hide behind the "anonymity". I also wanted to change my profile pic to one of Esmeralda from Disney's Hunchback of Notre Dame. ;) I'll go incognito and write of passion to my heart's content. What say you? Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 3/15/2015 1:06:00 PM
So beautifully romantic, Jade. I cannot write well about passion, but you definitely have a gift for it. The "passion race" rose like a crescendo to erotic release. Love, carolyn
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thanks, Carolyn. I do enjoy writing about passion. I sometimes wonder if I go too far...as in this write. My poor daddy dearest is a pastor, and he'd just die if he read this. :( Oh dear...that explains my name change. He's hankering to get on the Soup. He's a poet too. I'm keeping him at bay. Though he gives talks about human sexuality, and loves discussing the Song of Solomon...I think my writes would be way too much for him! ;) A bit of my life. Your writes are beautiful, Carolyn. Diversity is beautiful.
Date: 3/15/2015 9:10:00 AM
I think you meant unleashed. Now for the important part "ooh la la licious!" I really like when you use this form, you make it conform to your boundless passion. Making love under moonlight is a sweet treat.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 4:25:00 PM
:) Thanks, dear. I'll fix it. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2015 10:00:00 AM
Third stanza, hair unleashed.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 9:15:00 AM
Did I use that word other than in the last stanza? Unless my eyes are deceiving me, I've used it correctly... :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 9:14:00 AM
You always look out for me, Richard. I'm so blessed you're in my life...and I'm not talking just spelling here. :) How are you? Glad to have you visit. I will make the change...thanks ever so much. You know...I do love Iambic Meter...I feel that it is just the pulse of my heart...I do like writing free verse and some other forms, but as you said...this is the most effortless for me. Sort of like you....and the terzanelle. You haven't written one in a while. I hope you do soon. Making love as portrayed in this poem is sweet indeed. The icing on the cake called life. Thank you for visiting me. Hugs
Date: 3/14/2015 11:20:00 PM
Boy Howdy!! I though it was hot here in Texas but this poem is Hot and Spicy -- very tasty! Lovers embracing in the moonlight! 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2015 11:23:00 PM
Oh...it's a little on the edge... ;) But...it's hot alright. Haven't written on in a while, David. Glad you liked it....That should put some fire in your bones. Get to writing! That's an order. Haven't read a new one in AGES...LO
Date: 3/14/2015 8:34:00 PM
Hi Jade, :) :) thank you for the wonderful and romantic look around your heart. Luv SKAT
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 3:01:00 AM
Skat...thanks for taking the time to visit and post a comment. Sweet of you!!! Hugs
Date: 3/14/2015 2:01:00 PM
- Steaming hot ...... romance in beautiful music - I wish you a beautiful weekend, dear Eileen (Jade :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 3/14/2015 2:03:00 PM
:))) ok :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2015 2:02:00 PM
Love you, Sunshine. You know it's true. I admire you...HUGS!!! Jade for now....especially when I write these kinds of poems.... ;)
Date: 3/14/2015 1:54:00 PM
ooh Eileen sultry passionate - sexyyy brilliant write:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/15/2015 5:48:00 AM
Would have to think about that one Eileen its not my usual scene - maybe in time but not at the moment lol-) Hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 3:03:00 AM
and I'm still doing what I do...how about we write a humorous/sensual piece!!! ;) HA HA HA...wanna collab?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/14/2015 1:57:00 PM
coping fine most of the time:-) still writing with humour lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2015 1:55:00 PM
Haven't done one in a bit.... :) Got it out of my system! ;) How are you, sweetie.....???? Hugs