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Sequence Christmas; Too much food Milk and cookies Crumbs in Santa’s white beard Ho Ho! New Years; Hats and horns Headache brewing Sleeping in profoundly Till morn Created on 11/08/14 for- Cinqku Poem- Dr. Mehta Poetry Contest Theme: “Holidays”

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 11:17:00 AM

I really look this one. I would have placed it higher! Congrats for your win.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/14/2014 12:50:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for your vote of confidence. I really enjoyed your poem for this contest. Congratulations on your excellent win. Have a great day. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/11/2014 9:07:00 PM

I love the crumbs in the beard Earl. Congratulations on your win.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/12/2014 4:47:00 AM

Hi Brenda. Thanks. Santa was in a hurry so he got a little sloppy with the cookie crumbs. He has good intensions though. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win in this contest. Take care. Earl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/11/2014 4:58:00 AM

Fantastic take on theme Earl! Congrats on ur awesome winning write!

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/11/2014 9:45:00 AM

Hi Dr. Sharma, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your wonderful poem also. Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2014 10:41:00 AM

Lovely write, Earl! Lucky to be able to have a good sleep, finally! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/11/2014 9:52:00 AM

Hi Paul, Thank you so much. I could have just as easily made him sleep in till "noon" in place of "morn" but I didn't want him to come off as a lush... Congratulations to you too on your excellent win in this contest. Have a great day. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2014 8:14:00 AM

oh sorry I missed this one Earl - love the humour here:-) congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/10/2014 10:06:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thanks! I thought yours was great. Congrats back at ya! Take care. Earl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2014 5:42:00 AM

I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Earl

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/10/2014 7:48:00 AM

Good morning Dr. Mehta, Thank you. It was an interesting undertaking. Have a great day. Earl