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Christmas: Oh, what fun -- Santa clause, gifts, Family gatherings, Lights, cheers! Alone, I sit sad in sheer darkness... Wish you happy birthday Jesus. ~Contest by Dr. Ram Mehta ~Theme: Holidays ~Date: 11/6/2014 ~Form: Cinqku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 11:01:00 AM

Dr. Ram chose a very good first place winner. CONGRATS with this gem.

Debra Squyres

Date: 12/12/2014 8:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win !!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/11/2014 5:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Abdul. I hope you don't sit alone in darkness.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/11/2014 3:43:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win Abdul ! Vibrant emotions so well penned !

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2014 9:05:00 AM

Congratulations, Abdul! Loved your poem, especially the crossing from joy to sadness. #7 May you have a joyful Christmas! // paul

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/10/2014 7:15:00 AM

congratulations on this fine win

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2014 5:44:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2014 5:19:00 AM

I enjoyed your Cinkqu and happy to congratulate you on your win, Abdul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 12:16:00 AM

You did a GREAT job with your cinqku. Impressive!

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/9/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thanks much. Glad you liked it.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 6:26:00 PM

i love th contrast in the two parts - great write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/8/2014 2:07:00 PM

Thanks Jan, appreciate your comments.