Sequence-Verge of Life

Dead nettle, cow parsley, a high rise weed- feed, seed- fulfil desires of other's verdant need

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Raul Moreno

Date: 2/22/2009 9:42:00 PM

Nice stream of words is this lanterne. Great work Brian...Raul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/22/2009 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Brian for your comments. I tried to find what you meant by phonal couplet. Couldn't find it. Hope I qualify. You have such interesting contests I feel obliged to try. This is an interesting form too. Love, Joyce

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/22/2009 5:58:00 AM

Your Brain cooked up another clever one Sir Brian. Well done and thanks for the always kind words.

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/22/2009 5:49:00 AM

So true and well stated! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/22/2009 4:35:00 AM

How these survive and spead themselves about. Beautiful poetry, Brian. Clever write from a man of vision! Thank you for sharing them, always. Love, Robin