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September Swings

September swings from autumn to spring Her rippled cool pools of serene green To russet sunsets on orange wings Berry buds glazed in apricot sheen From autumn to spring, september swings 09/21/22 N/A in Bite Sized Poem #52 contest by Line Gauthier Judged 10/06/22 Entered in X'd Poems Second Chance contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2022 5:49:00 PM

Michelle, a lovely nature poem. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- x'd poem - Second Chance, well done, blessings

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/30/2022 11:42:00 AM

Nicely rhymed and written and yes the seasons swing to fast. Now for the dreary days of winter. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2022 9:57:00 AM

Lovely to the ears and the palate! Love the colors!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/27/2022 8:59:00 AM

WoW! Michelle, You captured seasonal changes very well in your” bite-size” entry. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have an awesome day-Alexis

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/22/2022 11:26:00 AM

Aye, the pendulum keeps hanging around! Enjoyed! Aloha! ("England Swings like a Pendulum do" 1965, Roger Miller)

Anil Deo

Date: 9/22/2022 11:18:00 AM

Yes, a global perspective. For many years ... My September 11th birthday could not be celebrated by me when in 2001, my world died as America's innocence did. Terror coddled in "religious hearts," failed to remove AMERICA'S varied colors, Fall festivals, & spirit that overcomes. Shalom Sis, shalom

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/22/2022 10:52:00 AM

Michelle, grandeur resounds throughout your verse. I adore the several tones of calm green, and your poem encompasses every one of those tones here. In addition, your insights are quite perceptive. Thanks for dropping a comment on my page and Good luck with the contest.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/22/2022 4:10:00 AM

I love the colors of serene green and your poetry is of every shade here, as beautiful as you are, have a lovely day dear lady

John Watt

Date: 9/21/2022 9:54:00 PM

Love the cool, crisp vibe to this, the line russet sunsets on orange wings, and the way you inverted the first line to make the last line (like a swing coming back to its starting place). My September really swings when I put on my Ella Fitzgerald and Duke Ellington CDs! Happy Fall, my artistry sib ~ John