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September Swings

September swings from autumn to spring
Her rippled cool pools of serene green
To russet sunsets on orange wings
Berry buds glazed in apricot sheen
From autumn to spring, september swings

09/21/22

N/A in Bite Sized Poem #52 contest by Line Gauthier
Judged 10/06/22

Entered in X'd Poems Second Chance contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Constance La France Date: 12/10/2022 5:49:00 PM Michelle, a lovely nature poem. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- x'd poem - Second Chance, well done, blessings Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/30/2022 11:42:00 AM Nicely rhymed and written and yes the seasons swing to fast. Now for the dreary days of winter. love phyl Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/8/2022 9:57:00 AM Lovely to the ears and the palate! Love the colors! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 9/27/2022 8:59:00 AM WoW! Michelle, You captured seasonal changes very well in your” bite-size” entry. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have an awesome day-Alexis Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 9/22/2022 11:26:00 AM Aye, the pendulum keeps hanging around! Enjoyed! Aloha! ("England Swings like a Pendulum do" 1965, Roger Miller) Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 9/22/2022 11:18:00 AM Yes, a global perspective. For many years ... My September 11th birthday could not be celebrated by me when in 2001, my world died as America's innocence did. Terror coddled in "religious hearts," failed to remove AMERICA'S varied colors, Fall festivals, & spirit that overcomes. Shalom Sis, shalom Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 9/22/2022 10:52:00 AM Michelle, grandeur resounds throughout your verse. I adore the several tones of calm green, and your poem encompasses every one of those tones here. In addition, your insights are quite perceptive. Thanks for dropping a comment on my page and Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/22/2022 4:10:00 AM I love the colors of serene green and your poetry is of every shade here, as beautiful as you are, have a lovely day dear lady Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 9/21/2022 9:54:00 PM Love the cool, crisp vibe to this, the line russet sunsets on orange wings, and the way you inverted the first line to make the last line (like a swing coming back to its starting place). My September really swings when I put on my Ella Fitzgerald and Duke Ellington CDs! Happy Fall, my artistry sib ~ John Login to Reply