September

Lonely sand dune on the beach,
flying seagulls I can't reach,
alone I walk so quiet and bleak
alone with the sunshine warm on 
my cheek, soft sounding whistles
that seem so far coming from seashells
shaped like a star....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Beautiful imagery of a warm beach walk in September, Copeland. We take these walks year round here in Florida. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 9:47 PM
Very nice imagery in this one Copeland and enjoyed the placing of words too... keep that gifted pen going ..with luv..ciao..
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Nice description of the September, Copeland
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