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September 1945

red rooftops appear to glow in rainy-day haze
lost in memories of pre-war bliss
     she looks up to watch them bleed

pain is its own reward sometimes
better than the numbness 
     she so desperately seeks to leave behind

tiny poodle escorts her on La Rue de la Paix
peace has come to Paris at last
     but in her heart, agony lingers

she heard the Fuhrer took his own life
cyanide and a bullet, too merciful for a demon
     how her sweet Emil must have suffered in the death camp

his last gift to her, a red umbrella to offer shelter
at a time when he so direly needed protection
     from horrific torture, starvation, gas chambers

footsteps behind her; she pivots, her poodle barks
what’s this?  is rain playing tricks on her eyes?
     he presses his lips on hers and she knows     

yes, yes, these are Emil’s lips
still clad in a prisoner’s striped uniform, he holds her
     she feels his ribs as they embrace

autumn rain soaks the fashion district near their home 
while a violinist in a nearby café plays Chant des Partisans
     overwhelmed, she wonders, is this a dream or is he home to stay?
        



*Written November 1, 2018
N/A in The Red Umbrella Contest
Contest judged that 11/13/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 11:58 AM
What a gripping poem, Carolyn. Very emotional. The way you chose to leave the end is precious. So glad to se it published here in the 2020 PS Anthology.
Fairchild Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Oh This is a knockout piece! I cannot explain why it touches me so deeply, probably because of losing my own dear wife. May every grace be unto each sweet soul, who has so suffered. A FAV for me!
Gaul Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:32 PM
You lead with your heart Carolyn with this one. Nothing better to do in life or poetry. This piece is its own reward. I will read it again.
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:12 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, my red brolly made it too. Tom
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Carolyn, this is so beautifully penned and so emotional, it is a WINNER to me and a FAV ~
Allison Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 12:30 PM
such a emotional piece Carolyn, you researched this so well and I'm sad it wasn't on the winners list - adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Reading up on the war was interesting, Jan. Thanks for your kind words. We get disappointments and we move on...
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Standout piece that showcases your abilities to full advantage. This poem could belong in a sense in any century and recognised masters of the art would be happy to have penned it. It is poems like this that keeps hearts beating and the will to live strong. Regards David in NZ
Devonshire Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 11:14 PM
Thank you so much, David. It is one of very few poems I deemed acceptable for my next book, so you comments meant a great deal to me. I found your poem on taxes to be quite memorable. I've been thinking about it hours after having read it. Good job!
Asbury Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Beautiful and touching...exotic and about something that pulls the heartstrings. I am so glad to have found you!
Devonshire Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:19 PM
I'm glad to have found you too, Sherry. Very much enjoyed your poetry today!
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:21 PM
A most beautiful and touching poem, Carolyn. This will undoubtedly bring tears to the eyes of those who are somehow connected to those who suffered the horrors of war. ~ Hugs // paul
Devonshire Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Thanks for reading, Paul. Though this war was before our time, it is one by which we measure others.
Trim Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 5:53 AM
well done :)
Raven Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Hi Caroline this is such a wonderful, moving poem, seems like a winner to me. This one was written from the heart. I wish you well with this excellent write. You play the emotions so well. piece touches the heart deeply. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Devonshire Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Vladislav. I have enjoyed reading your work too.
Radke Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 8:20 PM
I have tears. This is so beautifully written. You've woven this story so deftly and realistically in this well-done writing. A wonderful story set in the most horror-filled era. A reminder that we must not forget for history forgotten is doomed to be repeated. Best wishes. Deb
Devonshire Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 11:22 AM
It really was the "most horror-filled era" as you described, Deb. We are having so much turmoil in the U.S. today that I wonder where we're headed. Couldn't stop crying last night when CNN did a feature on each of the 12 victims in the California bar shooting. These were young people with so much to live for. Very sad. Thanks for reading, Deb
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 4:35 PM
So poignant, esp. for someone like me, who lost family members, not to mention 6,000,000 co-religionists, to the horrors of the Third Reich. What can I say? What can anyone say? Stories and poems, like yours, are how we somehow come to grip with the nightmare. Reasons elude us. Best wishes, Gershon
Devonshire Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Gershon, I'm so sorry to hear you lost family and other members of your religions during the war. I'm Catholic and also had relatives persecuted, though I'm not old enough to have met them. When I see bigotry and hate growing in my country now, I always think about the way our president openly attacks minorities and sides with hate groups that persecute them. Pitiful. Thanks for reading.
Horsman Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Poetry, one can truly place oneself in. although in many different ways, to many different folk, this is so deep so real, so you, Carolyn Devonshire. An amazing sensation reading this, in fact hauntingly so.
Devonshire Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 5:45 AM
I'm so glad you like it, Harry, and appreciate your kind comments.
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Reads like a good contender. Thanks f or dropping by..Sara
Lawless Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:58 AM
WHEW!!!! Lest we forget all those who sacrificed so much.
Michael Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 3:39 AM
You captured the scene of that time...and concerns that troubled the people...as if you were there...Very nice...All the best Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thank you, Arturo. Wishing you big success with your amazing new recording!
Messina Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 8:45 PM
My dear friend, Carolyn. This is such a wonderful poem that truly enchanted me. You too have painted a beautiful picture of love & hope with a sort of fairy tale ending to warmth our hearts. Truly enjoyed your magnificent poem. A winner either way...Best wishes in the contest. Love & hugs ~Charlie
Devonshire Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 10:55 AM
I guesw the reader may not know whether or not it was a dream. Thanks for your comments, Charles
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 12:07 PM
- You've really described this picture amazing, Carolyn - I love this story ... I will congratulate you already ... this is the winning poem .... true my words :) - Regards with love // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 12:29 PM
You're so sweet, Sunshine. I really enjoyed your entry! Eve will have fun reading the many beautiful love stories composed for her contest.
Gondolf Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 11:26 AM
I always enjoy a good story with a happy ending, Carolyn, nicely written. Best of luck in the contest. John
Devonshire Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Thanks, John.
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 9:24 PM
In response to below, I had a very good day, Carolyn. Saw Goosebumps with my grandson (not my kind of movie but it was mildly entertaining) We all ate out together later, my daughter and her kids and the grandpa Gordon!
Proxenos Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Hi Carolyn An absolutely awesome write of a war torn Europe where romance still lingered. Enjoyed enormously xoxo, Jennifer
Devonshire Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. I'll check your page --
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Amazing how you advanced the context theme into a wonderful story of love, apt for the period. Expertly written..a sure win, Carolyn.
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 8:36 PM
wowow, Carolyn you were so greatly inspired by the theme. Your entry is very creative and original. i love how you made it a happy ending . If this does not garner a top place I will be really surprised.
Devonshire Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations on YOUR top win, Andrea!!
Devonshire Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 10:39 PM
The street in the photo looked like one that might be found in Paris. La Rue de la Paix is the heart of the Paris fashion district and the woman in the image appeared to be stylishly dressed. That's what took me to this approach. Thanks for your comments, Andrea. Hope you have a great weekend!
Rose  Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Ah, so well written Carolyn. Its sure to be a winner . Thanks for sharing it, drum roll please !
Devonshire Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Didn't make Eve's winners' list, but was still fun to write.
Devonshire Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Thanks for reading, PD. I'll visit your page.
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