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September

Stepping gently in, on the edge of summer You are the one who mellowed glorious sun On playgrounds, picnics, frolicking in fun In euphony of birdsongs of amiable dawns Where horizon velvet gleams golden nylon As verdant-hills, slowly, adorn tawny-brown. But why, O, why your days still remain hot Too cold to swim, quite pleasing on yacht Sometimes alike August, sometimes Fall, Colorful you may be, donning ochre pizazz, Yet, judging by palette, October you’re not. Still, September, you’re a welcome friend For defying decisively summer’s humid reign, Leading the way to autumnal escapades, Readying crop-fields, priming for harvests: Beans, beets, apples, wholesome kale fresh; You’re a trusted mate to farmer’s avid quest. Why be then jealous of splendorous spring Or resplendent prairies of October dreams, Or dazzling meadows of crimson red leaves, Or snowflakes of winter charming romantics; When being so unique, you would rather be. September 18, 2021

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Date: 12/13/2021 4:49:00 PM
Dear Vijay, I adore September and I greatly admire (and adore) your resplendent September poem! Your exquisite imagery takes my breath away.. every poetic line shines with gem-light luster. A dazzling personification capturing the bountiful and beautiful spirit of September.. and your last verse is simply divine for a grand finale to an enchanting piece. A Fav! Indeed, I am thoroughly enchanted as I linger in the wonderful artistry of this piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:53:00 AM
Wow.... got so carried away by the beauty of your poem. September is a month I used to like much, but now with climate change, its features have become erratic. Your poem is a vivid sketch of all that the season enfolds.
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Date: 9/27/2021 9:45:00 AM
Hi Vijay: I love your beautiful imagery flowing from your pen like magic. Best, SuZ
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Date: 9/24/2021 8:53:00 AM
Yes, we are on the cusp of autumn/winter. I love seasonal change but the lines are getting blurred these days...Delice
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Date: 9/21/2021 4:39:00 PM
Lovely, vividly descriptive, appealing poem, Vijay. Janice
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Date: 9/20/2021 3:30:00 AM
Great poem on September, Vijay, I like how you personified it:)
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Date: 9/19/2021 8:50:00 PM
"On the edge of summer, yet- October you're not" So true. It certainly is a beautiful mixture of both seasons. This time of year truly takes my breath away. You paint such vivid images with your words, my dear friend. I am smiling. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/19/2021 12:09:00 PM
I really enjoyed this beautiful poem Vijay! September is special, as your writing is. I hope all is well :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2021 1:28:00 PM
That is wonderful to hear my friend. Much appreciate, as always, your supportive comments, Heidi. Enjoy the autumnal hues coming your way.
Date: 9/19/2021 11:31:00 AM
Yes, September is in a class all its own . Can be very fall like. Or can be very summery. That makes it fantastic for ME!! Great job here, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2021 1:26:00 PM
Well, as it should be, Andrea--being the month in which you were born--a special treat for a special person. Many thanks for your comments, Andrea. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 9/19/2021 10:34:00 AM
Your September segue is gloriously on point Vijay. chock full of fantastic imagery, Good luck in the contest!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2021 1:23:00 PM
Much appreciate Mike, your kind feedback. many thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/19/2021 2:47:00 AM
Your palette of poetry has painted a mystifying portrait of September that the great painters would have been envious of, my dearest friend, Vijay! Masterfully done! It looks Asa winner to me. A Fave my friend, Vijay!
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Date: 9/19/2021 5:58:00 AM
Your vote of confidence means a lot my friend. An honor to receive a FAVE from a man who dwells in wisdom. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Demetrios. Many thanks.
Date: 9/18/2021 11:28:00 PM
Wow am reading so many beautiful entries for this contest... Your write is excellent as always Vijayji... you have captured the essence of this unique month by including all details of it with your powerful pen... Best wishes... ~ Ani
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2021 5:55:00 AM
So glad you stopped by with your delightful comments, Ani. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many many thanks.
Date: 9/18/2021 11:47:00 AM
Your poem has a soothing effect to it. I enjoyed reading it. Vijay, you've captured a beautiful moment in time in your verse; it didn't entirely fall yet, but it was still pleasant to be out in the fresh air.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 12:20:00 PM
Glad you liked the poem, Lasaad. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 9/18/2021 9:51:00 AM
Hello Vijay, Very nice memories in September's harvest. There's definitely a different feel blowing in the breeze. Good luck in the contest. -Richard
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 12:20:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Richard. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 9/18/2021 9:00:00 AM
A beautiful month you've captured well in your verse Vijay, not quite autumn and still pleasant to venture outside. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 12:19:00 PM
So true--Tom. Hope you have great weather where you are. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Date: 9/18/2021 7:14:00 AM
Great feel in your poem; September for us is the door step toward winter. Good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 7:44:00 AM
Honored by your visit and comments, Eve. Much appreciate. Many thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/18/2021 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for bringing us into September, ripe in its own way. We should enjoy each moment not look behind nor forward but content. Thanks, V.J.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 7:43:00 AM
Yes--much to life if in harmony with present. Much appreciate Kim. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 9/18/2021 6:23:00 AM
Stunning!!! One of the best entries I have read ... Definitely a winner...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Supraja for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 9/18/2021 6:19:00 AM
September happens to be my month and I relish reading your beautiful verses, abounding with imagery and smart vocabulary. I wish you the best in the contest and hope my fave will be of help.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 7:41:00 AM
Your vote of confidence is special, Victor--whether this poem wins a place or not. A FAVE from you is an honor as well. Much appreciate your supportive comments. Many thanks.
Date: 9/18/2021 6:16:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, You described “ September. “ very well, as only you can; I found it well written and so poetic. Stellar content and imagery from start to finish. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2021 7:39:00 AM
You make my day my friend when you visit. Always a delight to read your complimentary remarks, Alexis. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

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