September

summer slips its heated veil in September 
           a noiseless stride smoothing out
                                            the numbing pace of leisure
we pull back to the looming pitch of harvest
      revering all its bounty

twilight summer
        as students on campus embrace renewal
breezily swept up in a spirit of new ideas
                                     that burn through old ones
filters of wanderlust, discovery, concentration
that frame a path for growth
reclaiming the active tone of younger voices

inevitable meandering to fall
wanning hours of summer sun
                 that bring light's gaze upon you
                 a folding inward
                 in shadowy cooler nights
                 that knit round you 
                                            like a healing sweater 
to forget the green that's lost beyond our borders
in the churn and flash of breaking autumn colors








Composed: September 17/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kingston Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 7:48 PM
I love poems about the seasons. I sense you do too. After years of teaching, I can almost smell new lunchboxes & backpacks as fall begins. "Wanning hours of summer sun" bring on early dark days, but I will have your cozy poem and others to read then. "in shadowy cooler nights that knit around you like a cooling sweater" is my favorite line. My favorite metaphor. What a delightful write. :) I liked it so much Brain.
Sambourne Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Your comments add so much value to my small posting. Thank you Marikate. Sweaters and the chilly nights of fall seem to fit together so effortlessly. My appreciation for your uplifting appraisal of the poem. Be well. Brian
Spilchuk Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Reminiscent of youthful college days on campus in September. Lovely verse.
Sambourne Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Dennis for your reading of the poem + for the message of support. All the best, Brian
Bowden Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 2:35 AM
A lovely guide through the seasons. Congrats on your win.
Sambourne Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 6:53 AM
Thanks very much, Craig, for your thumbs up on my "September" white. Cheers, Brian
Calasibetta Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:28 PM
Stunning imagery, resonates a classic movie! Congratulations on your win! :)Paulette
Sambourne Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Paulette, for your affirmative note. Seasonal scenes (fortunately) provide a wealth of images to anchor one's lines. With appreciation, Brian
Kauffman Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 11:04 AM
What wonderful poetic imagery Brian - so fresh and creative. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year!
Sambourne Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Uplifting comments from you Sam always make for a grand day despite winter's greyness here at the present. Thanks again. Brian
Alex Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Beautiful Writing. I enjoy reading your works. This is great. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Christuraj. Your thoughtfulness is a constant on Poetry Soup. Be well. Brian
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Good description of the month. It is past now and that particular September will never be again. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Greetings Sara. Thank you for your stop by + comment. My poem didn't register for recognition in the September poetry contest, but I am satisfied with my posting. Hope your health has improved. Cheers Brian
Spilchuk Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Autumn is a beautiful time of the year, and so are the other seasons. Falling leaves and the start of the school season. Nice write and enjoyable to read. Take care.
Sambourne Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Thank you, Dennis. Your words encourage me as this poem received a recent NA in a contest. I doubted the piece had merit. Your remarks are much appreciated. Be well. Brian
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Hello Brian Sambourne, yes September is the month of the beginning of Fall season. The leaves begins to change colors. A beautiful time of the year. enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Hello Brian, Sambourne, your welcome. Yes i am well thank you .I hope you are to. Best wishes sent your way. Darlene
Sambourne Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Thank you, Darlene, for your visit + thoughtful note. Hope that you are well. Best wishes, Brian
Wells Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 2:11 AM
Great imagery! It reminds me of the midwestern Fall of my childhood.
Sambourne Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Thanks very much, Thomas. September is an interesting bridge month between seasons. Sincerest regards, Brian
Fenn Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 8:39 PM
What a great picture of September! Very true to life!
Sambourne Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 9:20 PM
My appreciation for your thoughtful, supportive comment. Best wishes always, Brian
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