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September

the languishing time life’s richness is muted every note lowers—still sweet the pale tone won’t last long raindrops could fall warm or cold a single leaf drifts slowly to the ground nature drowses for a brief stillness only a moment still plenty of painting to do

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Date: 9/7/2020 8:30:00 AM
You are right and described it very well..
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Belden Raiser
Date: 9/7/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Silent One.
Date: 9/7/2020 12:32:00 AM
Hello, Beldon. Superb sentiment here, captured the change. Poem sits perfectly with some jazz piano.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/8/2020 8:50:00 PM
Oh, amazing! You already have huge musical skill, flowing in you. Hadn't read your lyric 'Shine' until just now. No doubt your expanding talents will bolster your endearing verse even further.!
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Belden Raiser
Date: 9/7/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Sigrid, I like your jazz piano idea. I am learning piano, ever so slow and painfully. Old dog new trick :)

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