Separation

Separation…

If I am what I am, tell me, who are you?
I am thinking of you; maybe I am you.	
There is oneness among us that covers all.
I am him, and he is me, and we are you.

I’m me, and you’re you, and you are me,
I am you, and he is me; how could it be?
I can see with my eyes, although it is dark.
I am hoping to see all, as he might see.

I am falling, and I don’t see the way out.
You told me that there was an end to my route.
I am falling into this bottomless pit,
The truth is lost; there is room for little doubt.


You told me to listen; I heard otherwise.
You taught me to look at; I had blinded eyes.
I wish that I could see that what the message is,
I stumbled again, wondering with surprise.

I wish to see the things all here and all there.
A thousand mysteries I found everywhere.
How can I trust my eyes, they betrayed my heart.
But if my heart wants it, they see it as fair.

I do not see myself as once that I was.
I knew all the science and all of its laws.
I wish I knew one more secrete in my life,
How come I came to existence without cause?

There was a time when I thought I knew it all.
All of that I’ve learned made me stand tall.
When I reached at the peak, I found out that I was,
a kind of wonderer, however small.

6/10/18 Haloo


The format of this poem is Rubaiyat, it is the plural of Rubai. Rubai is a quatrain with the rhyming of AABA. Each Rubai is a book by itself, it starts and ends within the quatrain, but when is in the form of Rubaiyat, it follows the same theme. Poetrysoup has a great explanation and examples.
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Fowler Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:38 PM
I read this through several times Pashang. Each time I discovered something new. I will think about this one for awhile I believe. :)
Raven Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Hi Pashang, dropping back with my congratulations on your win in the contest. Much deserved my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Salehi Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 2:05 AM
Thanks, Mike... I Hope you had a great New Year...
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:31 PM
- A great win, congratulations Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 2:03 AM
Thanks Anne Lise... you are so wonderful...
One Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 11:00 AM
Great rubaiyat, and thought provoking poem my friend.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Salehi Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 2:02 AM
Thank you Silent one...Thank you for considering my separation.
Raven Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Hi Pashang,Another creative write that does showcase your poetic talent. As the years pass we come forth from life's cocoon and become what we were always meant to be. So many question. You always leave the reader with thoughts when one reads your wonderful work. Every piece is creative and you always pick the best form to suit your thought. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Salehi Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 1:49 AM
Thanks, Mike... I’m me and you’re you and you are me... I believe we are all connected.
Flow Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:29 AM
love it! I love this topic, you express it so well, the struggle of duality and I love the lightness in the resolve and acceptance .. really lovely work Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 2:26 AM
Even flow comes from harmony and harmony comes from intelligence... Thank you, my friend.
Duet Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:44 AM
"Love your neighbor as yourself," is the key. It's called empathy and compassion now days and I can see that you are seeking someone who will empathize with you the way you empathize with them. Never give up hope, Pashang. When you stop searching and trust God to lead you with gratitude, your dreams will be fulfilled. Good poem expressing the desires of your heart and everyone's heart as well.
Salehi Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 5:41 PM
Thank you
Rose  Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 9:16 PM
We definitely change as we grow old and become who we truly are. you wrote this in a beautiful form, Well done
Salehi Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, I know I am a butterfly...
Juman Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:14 PM
This was very good
Salehi Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Thank you Al...
May Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Finding the way through the mysteries of life..Nicely penned Pashang
Salehi Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Raghunathan Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:24 AM
woww
Salehi Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Vidya for your exciting comment.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Beautiful, thought-provoking poetry, Pas! So many cool lines. Great poem! Love and joy always.
Salehi Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, my friend...
Sathasivam Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:12 AM
Excellent. A deep and thoughtful write. Enjoyed reading it.
Salehi Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Thank you, Ravi... you are a great friend.
Beaufort Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Yes, I like that you have yourself tuned into the forces of nature, and that you realize that we are just searching and will find out things we may find difficult to combine into a whole. A lot of separate parts are not so easy to integrate. But then, each of us is an individual.
Salehi Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 7:54 PM
indeed...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Your last quatrain spills it all! Man is in constant quest for knowledge.. unveiling mysteries.. reaching for divine truth and beauty.. what man gets are sips that would never assuage their thirst for answers.. these sips keep Man ignited and alive.. A joy to read your write. Stay blessed Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Besma...I think we all learn the message, but it might be too late to respond... According to the Dos Equis beer commercial... "Stay thirsty my friend" the thirst for knowledge... Blessing to you as well...
Smith Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 11:01 AM
You have demonstrated great skill with this form Pashang, no small endeavor, well done...
Salehi Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, Charlie, thanks for stopping by...
Ajmal Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:35 AM
It's a really deep and wonderful poem, alot of thought have been put together in it and I am sure that this poem was really difficult to write especially tje form but still you have done a wonderful job in writing it, good luck
Salehi Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thank you, Faraz. When you get to certain age, thinking is the only thing that you can do...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:30 AM
You have skills, this is very well expressed.
Salehi Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thank you ...
Warrior Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 11:08 AM
We are all the same...only the space between us is different...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^
Salehi Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Indeed... Thank you, WW...
Horsman Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 3:30 AM
What a beautiful poem, Pashang, i imagine, this being read by the author into a mirror, one line the question the next an answer,,,,anyhow, made me think,,as all wonderful poems do!
Salehi Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Thanks, Harry... as I wrote for Eileen, once a teacher is always a teacher... Be well, my friend...
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 1:35 AM
It is an interesting form, indeed. You make us go deeper into our souls to find answers.
Salehi Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:43 AM
Thank you, a teacher is always a teacher... forgive me...
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Pashang, very deep and thought provoking nicely done...Hugs Eve ~’*
Salehi Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:41 AM
Thank you Eve...
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Such thought provoking lines Pashang, the poem contains so many truths and the final stanza is one many can relate too:-) I am missing your fabulous paintings!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Salehi Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Hi Jan, I might stop working on something but I'm never finished. Of course you are immortalized.
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 4:59 PM
I understand about your painting as I constantly edit one my poems until I'm happy to post it and I still edit it as I read it before pressing the send button, I'm sure the picture will be unveiled once you are happy with it ... I still love the one with the reflected dragonfly I am immortalised in your art forever:-) hugs Jan xx
Salehi Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Hello, my dearest. Thanks for being so nice... I have one sitting in my room and looking at me for the past month or so. I don't like it and I keep changing it...
Sietesantos Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:01 AM
What a deep and powerful, philosophical Rubaiyat you have penned, my friend! You have raised pivotal questions that we all face as we go through life seeking to find out more about who we are as human beings. Excellently penned! Hugs. Pandita
Salehi Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Pandita... my question is that, isn't it just a possibility that I'm right, and we're all one...
Callus Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:13 PM
An excellent Rubaiyat containing a creative topic which you handle well, Pashang. I like how you thrust and probe...reminds me of a fencer using an epee! Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 3:15 AM
Paul, you are always so kind to me... I believe in the oneness...
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