Constance La France Poet Senryu

Senyru- It Is Done

in one last death gasp
      a son calls with a sad   sigh
             
                it is done father

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April 11, 2017

Senyru/it is done
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For the contest Easter Haiku or Senryu
Laura Loo

First Place

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Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 6:18 PM Well done, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win. ~*

Reason A. Poteet April 22, 2017 at 12:58 PM The best of the bunch in my book. Your image of Easter is clear and concise like a haiku should be. Congratulations.

Debbie Duncan April 21, 2017 at 11:54 PM Awesome, first place, favs :)

Kim Rodrigues April 19, 2017 at 11:42 AM The weight of the world from the beginning of time! Congrats, Constance!

John Michaels April 14, 2017 at 5:07 AM Wow! Like all great Haiku, this could have so many interpretations... then you see which contest it's been written for and that one fits so well. Good luck with the contest!

Paul Callus April 14, 2017 at 3:54 AM An expressive Senryu which impressively transmits a main chapter of our salvation. ~ Wishing you a happy and blessed Easter, Constance. // paul

Afolabi Muideen April 13, 2017 at 8:44 AM What a lovely and well penned poem. Good luck.

Lisa Ricci April 12, 2017 at 5:16 PM Good Evening Broken. This is extraordinary. You have captured the entire essence being and meaning. Well done in all areas. Best of luck with the contest.

Chris Green April 12, 2017 at 6:02 AM So very cool. What a perfect poem for the contest. I just love how this feels to read. Constance La France April 12, 2017 at 8:59 AM Chris thanks for the love.

Eileen Manassian April 12, 2017 at 2:05 AM Amen...beautiful piece, dear. With those words our salvation became sure. Good luck in the contest. Constance La France April 12, 2017 at 8:55 AM Eileen thanks for the beautiful.

Maria Williams April 12, 2017 at 1:41 AM What a lovely Senyru. I have the greatest respect for these forms of poetry, having a Japanese daughter-in-law, who has inspired me a lot, including believing that less is more, and you have in these 3 lines conveyed that and invoked emotion as well. Brilliant, a 7+++ Constance La France April 12, 2017 at 8:56 AM Maria thank you for the brilliant.

John Beam April 11, 2017 at 8:04 PM Very nice and He is risen! Constance La France April 12, 2017 at 8:57 AM John thanks for the visit