Sentimental Pain - Teppo Gren and Seren Roberts

SONNET – SENTIMENTAL PAIN 

A story of love’s pain, too hard to bear, 
for a sensitive, brittle, teenage heart. 
Promise of never ending love to share 
destined for happiness, never to part. 

Sentimental love‘s tender emotion 
left wanting in it’s beautified glory 
to flourish through eternal devotion 
in dread of demised, bereft love story. 

Walking life's road looking up to the sky 
no words can silence the guilt of living, 
closes eyes and whispers why I oh why, 
alone with lost love never forgiving. 

Tears flowing down a broken hearted face 
solace of compassion without embrace. 


Seren Roberts & T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/29/2016 6:44:00 AM
Great choice of words, Seren. A very heartfelt piece.
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 1/29/2016 11:56:00 PM
thanks you Michael from the both of us......Seren
Date: 1/22/2016 4:51:00 AM
Truly sad and so very well done, gentlemen!
Login to Reply
Lane Avatar
Lin Lane
Date: 1/22/2016 12:36:00 PM
I'm glad you did...collabs. are great fun.
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Lin We enjoyed writing this.....Seren
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter