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Sentimental Pain - Teppo Gren and Seren Roberts

SONNET – SENTIMENTAL PAIN A story of love’s pain, too hard to bear, for a sensitive, brittle, teenage heart. Promise of never ending love to share destined for happiness, never to part. Sentimental love‘s tender emotion left wanting in it’s beautified glory to flourish through eternal devotion in dread of demised, bereft love story. Walking life's road looking up to the sky no words can silence the guilt of living, closes eyes and whispers why I oh why, alone with lost love never forgiving. Tears flowing down a broken hearted face solace of compassion without embrace. Seren Roberts & T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/29/2016 6:44:00 AM
Great choice of words, Seren. A very heartfelt piece.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/29/2016 11:56:00 PM
thanks you Michael from the both of us......Seren
Date: 1/22/2016 4:51:00 AM
Truly sad and so very well done, gentlemen!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/22/2016 12:36:00 PM
I'm glad you did...collabs. are great fun.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Lin We enjoyed writing this.....Seren

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