Sensual Sounds

He loosens his tie,
as the power of lust
struggles to choke him.

He stares at the bathroom door,
as though a part of his soul
is locked there.

Sounds that make his body sweat,
and natural pillar stand firm
are emanating from the bathroom;
sound of a dress being unzipped,
sound of the dress gently falling
on the floor,
sound of the steamy shower,
sound of her singing......



Date: 08/09/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 3:10 AM
Well done for your win, but you need to take out the comma after "firm".
Kimathi Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 6:16 AM
Oh, thank you for the correction Julia. I'm also glad you enjoyed my work. Thank you for your applause! *^_^*
Nance Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Simple pleasure...a tease...a temptation...nicely visioned
Kimathi Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Thanks Casarah! *^_^*
Inman Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 2:48 PM
I very much enjoyed this Teddy. The subtlety of the the sounds are what make it effective. It also allows room for individual interpretation.
Kimathi Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Hi James. Amazing how you interpreted what was in my mind as I wrote the piece. Thank you for commenting on my work! ;-)
A  Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 1:36 PM
well done... sk
Kimathi Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Thanks Skat! *^_^*
A. Sharma Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Superb take on this theme Teddy! Congrats on big win!
Kimathi Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Thanks so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Puddifoot Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 7:35 PM
once again you place in a contest of mine! something about this that appealed to me; subtle, understated eroticism with a nod to voyeurism - congrats on your win in my contest!
Kimathi Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Thanks so much for applauding my work in your contest Charlotte! There is also something about your contests, lol. Regards, Teddy.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Teddy, sizzling hot and I adore it, wonderful anticipation, 7+ and thanks for visiting my poem, Cecil . . . .
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Welcome Broken Wings! ;-) Thank you for enjoying my poem! *^_^*
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