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Sensual Sounds

He loosens his tie, as the power of lust struggles to choke him. He stares at the bathroom door, as though a part of his soul is locked there. Sounds that make his body sweat, and natural pillar stand firm are emanating from the bathroom; sound of a dress being unzipped, sound of the dress gently falling on the floor, sound of the steamy shower, sound of her singing...... Date: 08/09/2015

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Date: 9/20/2015 3:10:00 AM
Well done for your win, but you need to take out the comma after "firm".
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/20/2015 6:16:00 AM
Oh, thank you for the correction Julia. I'm also glad you enjoyed my work. Thank you for your applause! *^_^*
Date: 9/18/2015 5:00:00 PM
Simple pleasure...a tease...a temptation...nicely visioned
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2015 5:07:00 PM
Thanks Casarah! *^_^*
Date: 9/18/2015 2:48:00 PM
I very much enjoyed this Teddy. The subtlety of the the sounds are what make it effective. It also allows room for individual interpretation.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2015 5:06:00 PM
Hi James. Amazing how you interpreted what was in my mind as I wrote the piece. Thank you for commenting on my work! ;-)
Date: 9/18/2015 1:36:00 PM
well done... sk
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2015 5:04:00 PM
Thanks Skat! *^_^*
Date: 9/17/2015 11:11:00 PM
Superb take on this theme Teddy! Congrats on big win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2015 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 9/17/2015 7:35:00 PM
once again you place in a contest of mine! something about this that appealed to me; subtle, understated eroticism with a nod to voyeurism - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2015 5:00:00 PM
Thanks so much for applauding my work in your contest Charlotte! There is also something about your contests, lol. Regards, Teddy.
Date: 9/8/2015 6:57:00 PM
Teddy, sizzling hot and I adore it, wonderful anticipation, 7+ and thanks for visiting my poem, Cecil . . . .
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/9/2015 3:46:00 PM
Welcome Broken Wings! ;-) Thank you for enjoying my poem! *^_^*
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