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Cotton candy pinks and marshmallow whites flaunt iridescent sheens buffed by the sun. And colored clouds, lined with mother-of-pearl, are hung in the sky like a prize fairly won. Darkness gathers like tattered strands of gray, strewn across a sky of indigo blue. And stars glitter as a dying sun shrinks to a crimson ball with a scarlet hue. Ebony fingers scratch at the night sky like inky tentacles grasping for light. And as camouflaged greens morph into black, silhouetted abstracts merge in the night. Liquid amber burns atop umber waves, highlighting their frothy, foamy whitecaps. And golden beams gild glistening waters as cascading breakers crash and collapse. Playful breezes tickle leaves on the trees, sending laughter tumbling down to the sand. And as Sol dies, wrapped in a scarlet shroud, time's suspended, and reality's banned. (Quatrain) 4/1/2017

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Date: 5/23/2018 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
Fabulous vocabulary and imagery, a great write Emile.
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Date: 4/2/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. I truly appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2017 7:01:00 AM
Powerful imagery... So vivid!! Good write :) shubham
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Shubham, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 10:43:00 PM
An awe inspiring portrait of nature. A Fave Emile! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/2/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, your comments are always welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful imagery +10
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 6:35:00 PM
I meant images
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:32:00 PM
The visual imagers that your words convey are just outstanding Emile. 7+
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Date: 4/1/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Maria, your comments are always welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 4:14:00 PM
Exceptionally vivid imagery. The continuous use of change of color in particular. Very well written.
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Date: 4/1/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Forrest, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful write ...A7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your visit, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 12:34:00 PM
Wow Emile. This is an amazing poem! I love all the descriptions in your lines. And even the impact of laughter tumbling down to the sand. Very well written. The photo above is similar to some paintings I have done. Thanks for sharing all this with us :) A favorite !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. I truly appreciate it, Emile.

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