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Reality's Banned

Cotton candy pinks and marshmallow whites flaunt iridescent sheens buffed by the sun. And colored clouds, lined with mother-of-pearl, hang in the sky like a prize fairly won. Darkness gathers in tattered strands of grey, strewn across a sky of indigo blue. And stars glitter as a dying sun shrinks to a crimson ball with a scarlet hue. Ebony fingers scratch at the skyline; like inky tentacles grasping for light. And as camouflaged greens morph into black; silhouetted abstracts merge in the night. Liquid amber burns atop umber waves, highlighting their frothy, foamy whitecaps. And golden beams gild glistening waters; as cascading breakers crash and collapse. Playful breezes tickle leaves on the trees; sending laughter tumbling down to the sand. And as Sol dies wrapped in a scarlet shroud, time's suspended and reality's banned.
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Date: 5/23/2018 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
Fabulous vocabulary and imagery, a great write Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. I truly appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2017 7:01:00 AM
Powerful imagery... So vivid!! Good write :) shubham
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Shubham, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 10:43:00 PM
An awe inspiring portrait of nature. A Fave Emile! 7 ; )
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, your comments are always welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful imagery +10
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 6:35:00 PM
I meant images
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:32:00 PM
The visual imagers that your words convey are just outstanding Emile. 7+
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Maria, your comments are always welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 4:14:00 PM
Exceptionally vivid imagery. The continuous use of change of color in particular. Very well written.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Forrest, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful write ...A7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your visit, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 12:34:00 PM
Wow Emile. This is an amazing poem! I love all the descriptions in your lines. And even the impact of laughter tumbling down to the sand. Very well written. The photo above is similar to some paintings I have done. Thanks for sharing all this with us :) A favorite !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. I truly appreciate it, Emile.
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