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watching a snowstorm sat by a roaring log fire ... absorbing... its heat Date written 30/10/2018.

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Date: 7/24/2022 2:02:00 AM
On a wintry night, it would be a sweet experience ! Well written, Tom.
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Date: 7/24/2022 12:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, it certainly is. Tom
Date: 2/7/2019 5:29:00 PM
Hello Tom, I do miss sitting in front of a log fire. This brought back a memory. Thank you for that. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/12/2019 2:29:00 PM
Your right it is not the same.Have a nice day my friend.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/8/2019 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Darlene, there is something magical about a log fire, I grew up with one but now just radiators', certainly not the same. Tom.
Date: 11/16/2018 11:27:00 PM
Tom, love this, and that is where I am right now, as we got a big snowstorm in my part of Canada today ~
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Date: 11/17/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Dear Heart, I bet it's lovely to see from indoors with a warm cosy fire, no snow in UK only rain so far. Happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 11/16/2018 9:04:00 AM
Hi Tom, this little gem is a fave. I love the content, the images given. This is a beautiful piece. Somehow, storms ever give me peace inside. Strange, I know. Have a wonderful Friday. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Mike, I love to watch a good storm from the comfort of inside. You too Mike, enjoy the weekend. Tom.
Date: 11/11/2018 1:37:00 PM
I can't believe i never got to this little poem yet! Sweet and cozy.
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Date: 11/11/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, entered it for contest but forgot the date, sponsors name and contest title grrr.
Date: 11/4/2018 12:25:00 PM
I really like this, Tom! Janice
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Date: 11/4/2018 12:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Janice, glad you liked it. Tom.
Date: 11/3/2018 9:13:00 PM
So resonant. The familiar intimacy of the scene captured so well, Tom. Best wishes, Gershon
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/4/2018 3:54:00 AM
Thanks Gershon, nothing beats a natural fire. Tom.
Date: 11/3/2018 6:29:00 AM
A seasonal delight!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Kim, no bad weather here yet but they say it's coming. Tom.
Date: 11/1/2018 10:14:00 AM
oh that sounds good about now that the weather has changed... good write..
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Date: 11/1/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank you Eve,I dont have an open fire but my daughter has a log burner, love sitting by it in wintertime. Tom.
Date: 10/31/2018 3:17:00 AM
- I think it will be a cold winter .... I will enjoy this indoor heat - ... and enjoy the picture outside my window - Excellent written, Tom - Good luck in the contest :) - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine, you're further north so yours will no doubt be worse than ours. A few flakes here and the country grinds to a halt lol. Tom.
Date: 10/31/2018 1:41:00 AM
Hi Tom, You painted such a wonderful scene in a few words. I enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/31/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, beautiful to see from the comfort of indoors. Tom.
Date: 10/31/2018 1:37:00 AM
and also absorbing the warm feelings inside
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Date: 10/31/2018 5:46:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, a tot of whiskey doesn't go amiss. Tom.
Date: 10/31/2018 1:07:00 AM
A beautiful, heart warming picture you have painted for us Tom, almost a fairy tale image - really love it! I'm happy to think that even the poor can make a log fire, so long as they have shelter of course from the snow! Best wishes, Jennifer
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Date: 10/31/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, I'm happy you enjoyed it, no snow here yet but a bad winter is forecast. Tom.
Date: 10/31/2018 12:13:00 AM
Living in tropical country, never experienced a snow storm. Sensed your feelings.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/31/2018 3:11:00 AM
Thank you Anisha, you are in the best place, there is nothing worse than the cold. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 2:46:00 PM
I enjoyed the image which you projected, Tom. I also like the contrast between the cold outside and the warmth inside. Regards // paul
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul, Now that I'm older much prefer to watch the snow from indoors preferably with drop of whiskey to help with the inner glow. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 2:27:00 PM
How delightful! It warms the heart and mind dearest, Tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Demetrious, an image that may be reality in the next month or so. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 11:43:00 AM
A beautiful image Tom for your lovely Senryu!!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thanks very much Mike, happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 9:19:00 AM
I see that photo in your words..very apt for the season..well written, as always, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, going very cold here in the UK, hope its warmer where you are. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 8:39:00 AM
Very nice Tom. That's what it is like here, watching the snow storm from inside in front of the woodstove. Well done :)
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Date: 10/30/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, it sounds like you are in the right place, no snow here yet but the doom prophets are predicting a bad winter this year. Tom
Date: 10/30/2018 8:25:00 AM
What a beautiful scene you have painted in my mind.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Richard, its al good until you have to go out for more wood brrrr. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 8:18:00 AM
Cozy-ku! I love it Tom :) xomo!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, cosy is definitely the right word on those days. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 6:54:00 AM
Your words capture the warmth of the fire. Have a blessed day, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Wren, just added a video, I can feel the heat lol. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 6:45:00 AM
Ooh,make room for me too,Tom! It's bitterly cold here today. A lovely image!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 7:20:00 AM
Finally, managed to add the fire video from utube. Making me sleepy looking at it lol. Well, wine is chilling come and join me, when I was younger I used to go to Ireland and back then they all had these open turf and log fires going and I used to just sit there soaking up the heat, radiators are not the same for sure. Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 6:45:00 AM
I can feel the heat of the log, and see the snow. Wonderful imagery, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/30/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Caren. happy you enjoyed it. Tom.

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