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Senryu

I woke up weeping the bad dream came back last night- a single tear falls _____________________ January 10, 2021 Poetry/senryu Copyright Protected, ID 01-1319-959-10 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Senyru sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 01/14/2021 Submitted to the Standard contest, Your Choice (40) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/16/2021 Fifth Place

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/16/2021 5:58:00 PM

I know how this feels; sadly beautiful Constance :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2021 11:52:00 AM

FJ, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, I think we all know this feeling _Constance

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2021 3:24:00 AM

A great senryu Constance, I don't recall seeing this one in my contest.

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2021 8:58:00 AM

Tania, when I saw your list of winners, I was wondering about it myself, and when I checked my contest entries it was not there, perhaps I forgot to enter, but sure I did, so perhaps a glitch with PS, anyways thanks for the inspiration and perhaps I can use this in another contest one day, thanks so much for visiting and commenting _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/11/2021 11:27:00 AM

Hello Constance La France, bad dreams do happen. it is a nightmare. Once you go back to sleep you should be okay. Do not eat anything before bedtime. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/11/2021 4:07:00 PM

Hello Constance, okay. enjoy your evening my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2021 3:48:00 PM

Darlene, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, I have heard that about eating before bed before _Constance