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an old lady sweet with much clutter of antiques - the cookie is burnt _______________________________ March 17, 2019 Poetry/Senryu/I went to visit Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1125-538-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 3/18/2019 12:26:00 AM
I like your poem, sometimes the burnt ones are the best :)
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Date: 3/17/2019 10:50:00 PM
Inspired by your example. 'll try.
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Date: 3/17/2019 8:16:00 PM
Whoa; are you reading my mind? My omelet was burned this morning. Nice one.
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:00:00 PM
Like jan, I sure enjoyed your twist on this!! Thanks for this latest contest.
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:33:00 PM
love the twist in the poem Constance, a great contest example:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Jan.. looking forward to your entry !

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