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Senryu - Halloween Horror

darkness closes in creeping shadow silent scream - black cat caught your tongue October 31st 2018 Contest: Three Lines - Writing Challenge - October 2018 Sponsor : Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2018 5:42:00 AM

Great one mo! Many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/5/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thank you Jan! :)) xomo

Eve Roper

Date: 11/3/2018 7:31:00 PM

Wonderful, Maureen, congratulations on your win :) the cat always catches my tongue

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/5/2018 8:02:00 AM

Tee hee ;) thank you Eve! xomo

Constance La France

Date: 11/3/2018 12:26:00 PM

Maureen, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/5/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thank you Constance! :) xomo

Warren Doll

Date: 11/2/2018 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Maureen. Well deserved for this brilliant senryu. All the best~ Warren

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/3/2018 9:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Warren! :) xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2018 2:33:00 AM

- Scary shadows, Maureen ... luckily one year to the next Halloween ... - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/2/2018 12:57:00 PM

Tee hee, true enough! Thank you! :) xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/2/2018 1:18:00 AM

Arghhhhhhhhh ----and we're screaming off into the night. Bloodcurdling, my dear. Bravo! Congrats. :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2018 9:26:00 PM

Me-ow. :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/2/2018 12:55:00 PM

Thank you! You know, for a Wolfman, you are one cool cat my friend ;) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2018 8:10:00 PM

oh wow, me LIKey a lot!!! Congrat, maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/2/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! :))) xomo!

Mike Hauser

Date: 11/1/2018 10:25:00 AM

Nice!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thankya! :)) xomo

John Michaels

Date: 11/1/2018 6:49:00 AM

Nicely-evocative write, Maureen! Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thank you John :) xomo

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2018 5:53:00 PM

Sure did, and so did this wonderful poetry..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:11:00 AM

Ha! Thank you Harry :))) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2018 5:37:00 PM

Nicely done , Maureen, luck in the contest :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Eve! Happy All Saints Day :) xomo

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/31/2018 4:53:00 PM

well done, maureen! happy halloween...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:09:00 AM

Thank you Ilene! I hope you had a ton of spooky fun for Halloween :) xomo

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/31/2018 11:49:00 AM

Hi Maureen, This is a good piece for the contest theme and season. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Halloween:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Alexis! I hope your Halloween was a treat :) xomo!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/31/2018 11:32:00 AM

Love it Mo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:07:00 AM

Thank you! :) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/31/2018 11:29:00 AM

Creepy AND funny... it takes a special talent to pull this off! ;D Great work, my friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:06:00 AM

Thank you my friend :))) xomo!

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/31/2018 9:42:00 AM

I love your spooky Senryu Maureen!! Happy Halloween xxoo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thank you! Enchanté :) Happy Halloween! xomo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/31/2018 9:41:00 AM

Ha-ha Maureen, its not the cat that worries me its the witch. Good luck. Tom.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:50:00 AM

Hey the majority of witches I know are good witches, I trust them more than most cats ;) Thank you Tom! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/31/2018 9:38:00 AM

Fun write, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:39:00 AM

Thank you Line :) Happy Halloween! xomo

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2018 9:25:00 AM

Ha...that was good. Great word play. I used to stick my tongue out at cats but I would end up coughing up a hairball a few days later. : )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thank you! ...what are you doing with your tongue? ;p xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/31/2018 9:15:00 AM

Good one Maureen! Happy Halloween :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:19:00 AM

Thank you! Happy Halloween with more treats than tricks :) xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 10/31/2018 9:07:00 AM

...Halloween rule #35....NEVER stick your tongue out at a black cat.....(DON'T GO THERE MO.....)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:13:00 AM

LOL ;D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2018 9:02:00 AM

Ouch!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2018 9:13:00 AM

Boo! ;)