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her meow is still and my heart is in pieces ... memories I grasp ________________________ July 8, 2019 Poetry/senryu/loss Copyright Protected, ID 19-1164-995-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Standard contest, Senryu about Greed, Lust, or Loss sponsor, Tania Kitchin (Verified Syllables on How Many Syllables.com) First Place

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Date: 7/16/2019 10:08:00 PM
Lovely senryu ... Enjoyed reading ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:01:00 PM
I can see how this one topped the chart, Dear Heart. Congrats on the win and thanks for your recent inspiring contest you gave us.
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Date: 7/16/2019 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/16/2019 12:08:00 AM
Ah...this is one of the hardest losses of all. Congrats!
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Date: 7/15/2019 7:40:00 PM
Nice Dear Heart! Congrats..
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Date: 7/15/2019 7:20:00 PM
Hi BW, You've penned such a heart tugging piece about the loss of a pet. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/15/2019 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on first place!
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Date: 7/15/2019 7:04:00 PM
Heartbreaking gold. Congrats, D.H.
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Date: 7/15/2019 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on your first place win, this touched my emotions and reminded me of my beloved cat I had for 22 years. Excellent poem!
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Date: 7/9/2019 1:15:00 PM
such a heartbreaking write, my friend
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Date: 7/9/2019 11:52:00 AM
Oh, so sorry. A good friend lost her dog this week so this one really struck a chord with me. Evokes strong emotion! Well done!
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Date: 7/8/2019 8:55:00 PM
So sorry! Love is beautiful though it hurts.
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Date: 7/8/2019 8:14:00 PM
Touching, poignant. I gasped. ~ gw
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