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contest: a modern vanity

SELFIE PITY she sits on the stoop checking herself over and over again a flash tis dark in her modern tomb tongues almost touching accessories please dark hat a mystery flash almost nude fifty selfies talk back more likes than her? her heart’s still beating? apple red lips kill 7/9/2017 *Inspiration: Snow White

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/26/2017 7:52:00 PM

Congrats on your placement, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2017 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes

Harshath Vidheya

Date: 7/24/2017 8:50:00 AM

Congrats. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2017 10:29:00 PM

Thanks, Harshath!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2017 8:21:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2017 10:30:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/24/2017 1:24:00 AM

When I made my list of vanities I asked if there was anything else. The selfie certainly does make the list. Almost, it heads the list. Very good write. Congratulations, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2017 10:38:00 PM

Thanks, Janis!

Lewis Raynes

Date: 7/23/2017 11:29:00 PM

This is such a fast read, and ll too true, congratulations Kim.

Roy Pett

Date: 7/9/2017 9:23:00 AM

Great poem Kim, managed to take a selfie by mistake once, what I saw was frightening ha ha. Well written a joy to read.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2017 11:11:00 AM

LOL! Thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2017 4:21:00 AM

wow Kim this really is a twist on modern day vanity and the title is absolutely superb! I have never taken a selfie my phone is very basic just for calls and texts that is all I need and I hate my photo being taken anyway :-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2017 7:50:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan! I don't understand the need for constant selfies! Hugs :)