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Self-Reflection of Divine Intervention

She wore a besmirch engraving on her soul, an ebon stain tarnishing all she ever hoped she’d become one day. That chiseled etchidng could have been the death of her. The throes of her desolation seemed to be too much to handle for one lonely woman. Although she was damaged, she shined like celestial cherub full of ethereal fascination. Always tried her best to reach the heights only a firmament being could strive for. Stuck in a pinion too secure to find relief from, she craved repose like never before. For she never could grasp starvation until she hungered for an embrace so passionate that her spiritual apathy would find a thief. Her body lissome, her pale skin soft yet full of lines where a smile should reside. If only the world could see her for who she really was…a woman of resilience. She sure has changed over the years. She no longer does she sojourn in self-pity or melancholic moments. For she has found divine intervention through Jesus Christ. John Hamilton May 22, 2018

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Date: 6/9/2018 10:35:00 PM
Well done, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/6/2018 12:39:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your placement. Well done! :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:03:00 AM
thank you sweet Susan :)-luloo
Date: 6/5/2018 3:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/7/2018 8:03:00 AM
many thanks Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 6/4/2018 7:55:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words , Laura , with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:03:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 6/4/2018 11:28:00 AM
Nice write Laura, grammar on the last triplet threw this one out of a top placement, thanks for your entry!
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/7/2018 8:03:00 AM
thank you for my placement :)-luloo
Date: 5/22/2018 5:34:00 PM
Excellent, Luloo! I could feel the emotion and you used the words brilliantly and smoothly. Good luck in contest. Can't go by me, but should be on winner's list.
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Date: 5/23/2018 6:48:00 AM
thank you dear Susan :) -luloo
Date: 5/22/2018 7:35:00 AM
How complete is the healing of Jesus Christ, forgiving and bringing peace! Love this, Luloo!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/23/2018 6:48:00 AM
thank you sweet lady ;)-luloo

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