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Self-Pity In a Glass

When your fragile mind from your drink deceives You barricade your thoughts with angered sound With tongue of venom, your dulled mind perceives And find harsh words you chose go round and round This silent empty cauldron of desire Satisfies when your glass is filled to brim Finds a thirsty throat to now conspire And turn to stone a lovely Seraphim Who sits alone in realms of dark and cold With the saddest loneliness defiant And remembers passing themes that are old To search each shadowed pain lost and quiet You relive moments spent and drink to more With glasses empty on Dawn's fading floor 7/24/17

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Date: 7/27/2017 9:18:00 AM
So many truths artfully portrayed in this sonnet - was rewarding to savor in 3 reads.
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Date: 7/24/2017 3:02:00 PM
frederick, intensely expressed through your mug of images... let's stick to a dose of wine every now and then...greeat job!..huggs
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Date: 7/24/2017 1:39:00 PM
I was familiar with one who barricaded himself in such a way. Dr. Jekyll became Mr. Hyde who woke at many a dawn on the floor. Letting past pains ruin the present and future is the saddest form of trying to escape. Frederic, your write made me relive a sad time, but you conveyed your message extremely well.
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Date: 7/24/2017 1:12:00 PM
Wow. Excellent pen.
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:47:00 PM
powerfully penned Frederic - I have seen the ravages of drink destroy a family friend. Makes me so glad my main 'tipple' is a cup of tea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:35:00 PM
Somebody has to say it, "I'll drink to that", sorry Frederic... Well done.
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Date: 7/24/2017 11:53:00 AM
Well written Frederic. That really shows the situation to the reader! :)
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