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Seguidilla - 2

I try to take a selfie, but it saddens me! The face from my good old days I no longer see. “A Wrinkle in Time" could be MY cover's title now I’m past my prime! Sept. 14, 2017 For the Seguidilla Contest of nette onclaud Inspired by line 2: I can smile at the old days ; I was beautiful then. (and also by the famous novel title: A Wrinkle in Time)

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2017 9:55:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2017 7:51:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/22/2017 12:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2017 4:45:00 PM

Congrats Andrea!

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/21/2017 4:34:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea for your win in nette's contest

Constance La France

Date: 9/21/2017 3:11:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem !!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2017 2:47:00 PM

i had fun with this playful seguidilla, andie... will try to read that book for vanity's sake... congrats on your award and many thanks for lighting up my contest!..huggs

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/19/2017 8:12:00 PM

I like the light hearted take on the contest prompt :)

James Inman

Date: 9/18/2017 9:49:00 PM

What do you mean was!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/19/2017 7:30:00 PM

That "was" was part of the quote that inspired my poem!! I'm gonna look into the use of fillers. wrinkles near my mouth are really bringing me down!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2017 7:18:00 AM

Reads like a great contender for the contest..Don't worry about the wrinkles remember that you have earned each one of them..I enjoyed reading your work..I am not familiar with this form so I need to look into it..I might make me some notes in my poetry journal and try to write through the days ahead..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2017 9:30:00 PM

Andrea, a wonderful write for the contest, a winner

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/17/2017 9:11:00 AM

Your poems are still beautiful and showcase your young spirit, Andrea:)

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 9/16/2017 1:58:00 PM

You are never past your prime unless you say so dear Andrea. All the best in the contest

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2017 10:45:00 AM

LOL, funny but not true at all, my friend

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/15/2017 1:52:00 PM

we think one of your wrinkles just grew an extra smile ... ahh ... shh ... let's always be beautiful ... here ... we thought you up an Apple ... concentrate ... we really like your goods ...

John Michaels

Date: 9/15/2017 12:29:00 PM

A nice tongue-in-cheek entry, Andrea. The form looks interesting - I'll have to keep my eyes open for another contest in the series!! Kind regards, John.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/15/2017 8:26:00 AM

Is there any frown line, Andrea?Love. Great one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2017 2:17:00 AM

- Age has its charm, Andrea :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2017 11:13:00 PM

haha, awesome, Andrea, this is a wonderful poem. Hugs Eve~`*

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/14/2017 9:54:00 PM

This poem is basically my life! I love it, well done! Poetry with humor is such a pleasure. I expect it will do well in the contest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2017 7:58:00 PM

Great Andrea--on the mark with the theme!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/14/2017 7:18:00 PM

Oh this is so lovely and relatable Andrea. An awesome write and good luck in the contest -- but it's a winner already!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/14/2017 6:54:00 PM

oh, i can so relate to this one, andrea! good luck in the contest...

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/14/2017 6:27:00 PM

You are in your prime now! "Time is the stream I go fishing in" - Pythagoras. "May you stay forever young" - Bob Dylan Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jean Murray

Date: 9/14/2017 6:07:00 PM

I so dislike photos of me now. That damn camera should lie don't you think Andrea? Best of luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/14/2017 8:50:00 PM

It's very curious, JEan. I can't take a good selfie and yet SOME pictures of me turn out when taken by other people. When even THOSE stop turning out, I'll know it's truly the end!!!