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Alone on cobblestone streets Silence engulfs me A lonely strike at midnight Reflections I see Puddles with streetlights Pulling my heart underneath Drowned by shades of white Heidi Sands 9/13/17 *Placed 1st place in the Seguidilla Contest Sponsored by: Nette Oncloud *Checked by syllable counter

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Date: 9/23/2017 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, Heidi. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 2:56:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 9/23/2017 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Heidi, so pleased. :)))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/23/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Roy :)
Date: 9/22/2017 6:59:00 AM
Told you this would win, and I'm really glad it did, Heidi, congratulations:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2017 7:11:00 AM
You were right Jo ! Thank you for your comments :)
Date: 9/22/2017 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Subimal! :)
Date: 9/21/2017 4:42:00 PM
Lovely to see your # 1 win--Congrats Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 4:50:00 PM
Hi. I can't thank you enough for all your consistent , positive support. It means a lot to me :)
Date: 9/21/2017 4:32:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Joseph! :)
Date: 9/21/2017 4:31:00 PM
congratulations Hedi for your win in nette's contest...well done
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Frederic :)
Date: 9/21/2017 3:01:00 PM
Heidi, congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, great poem !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 3:27:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind feedback! :)
Date: 9/21/2017 2:25:00 PM
Excellent poetry Heidi, congrats :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Gary ! :)
Date: 9/21/2017 2:03:00 PM
Wow, Congratulations, Heidi XXXOOO
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Mike! :) Happy Thursday! :)
Date: 9/21/2017 1:12:00 PM
such a deep poem so beautifully and sommothly written , heidi.. sweet congrats on your top award and thanks for gracing this challenge..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 2:49:00 PM
Hi Nette! Thank you so much. I am happy I could participate in your contest! I appreciate the placement win :)
Date: 9/15/2017 1:13:00 PM
Nicely-written, Heidi. A definite sense of sorrow comes through. Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/15/2017 2:04:00 PM
Thanks ...John. :)
Date: 9/15/2017 11:47:00 AM
Mighty fine poem and pic, Heidi. Enlighten me, please. What is a Siguidilla? Excellent poem. Love and smiles always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/15/2017 2:03:00 PM
Hi Freddie. Funny...I was wondering the same. I just wrote it how the contest said to and with the photo the contest posted for inspiration . Thank you!
Date: 9/15/2017 10:12:00 AM
Very nicely penned Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/15/2017 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Joseph! :)
Date: 9/14/2017 8:47:00 AM
Wow! I love this one, Heidi, if I were the judge, I would rate this one as the first:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo Daniel. That is kind to say. I am happy you like it :)
Date: 9/14/2017 7:21:00 AM
Lovely moody poem Heidi, good luck :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Gary :)
Date: 9/13/2017 9:26:00 PM
Hey...Heidi, sounds like you've been to Copley Square. Just posted my entry and then read this one....let's just hope Nette is in the mood for love....good luck in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/14/2017 7:27:00 AM
Hi John. Thank you for your comment. I will read your entry and I wish you luck in the contest too :)
Date: 9/13/2017 7:15:00 PM
You did a good job Heidi with this poem--lovely interpretation of the picture--good luck to win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Your feedback is always appreciated :) You are kind.
Date: 9/13/2017 6:27:00 PM
Striking picture to fit a lovely moody poem!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite. The photo was at the contest, for inspiration to write the poem.
Date: 9/13/2017 6:24:00 PM
Oh, I love this! This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and heartwarming poem here this evening! You have amazed me yet again by your incredible skill Heidi, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you Russell! I always appreciate your uplifting, kind comments :)

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