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Seething

Foam whitely seethed, stirred up by surf While sun beat down upon hot sand And there, a way’s, a couple lounged In folding chairs set side-by-side, Umbrella flapped, it cast its shade, When up the strand two ladies trekked, Bikinis bright and teeny, tight, Man’s face, alert, With eyes joined them: From where she sat, Rebuked woman, Hand tugged his chin, Imploring stop! His finger rose, Her chair, she left To point their way. “So what?” he shrugged, Both feet he found, Her back, she turned, His arms went cross And head leaned in, The shifting breeze With anger filled— She stooped and grabbed her canvas tote And swiftly marched past swaying grass, Retreating well behind the dune; Umbrella sagging, chairs turned flat, The jilted man, he struggled, stormed: He made the dune and plodded on While surf roared in, and foam seethed white. March 2, 2017 Lover’s Quarrel Poetry Contest Lewis Raynes, Sponsor

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Date: 3/2/2017 6:20:00 PM
I enjoyed the way you formed this poem. Nicely done, David!
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Date: 3/2/2017 3:16:00 PM
Well penned Bose. Best wishes in the contest.
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David Bose
Date: 3/2/2017 4:17:00 PM
Appreciate it--thanks.
Date: 3/2/2017 2:34:00 PM
Sounds like someone got burned at the beach that day. :) Very cool David. I like the scene you created. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:53:00 PM
Very funny: guess I'll use lots of sunscreen if I'm going to have wandering eyes come summer. As always, thanks.

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