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Seethe

The still water of the northern swamp shone like anthracite coal lending a rainbow hue to the reflections of maiden hair fern and skunk cabbage. Strangely, maples rooted wearily beneath in the hidden depths of blue-blackness. Sunlight sparks like fireflies. The leaden air caskets the first layer of rampant growth, misting moss, masking mushrooms where slick green frogs hide. The heat bakes the bank but the swamp seethes in delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/23/2009 9:28:00 AM
Puicturesque. I'm from the Anthracite region in Pa. Vince
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:36:00 PM
ugh...probably riddled with mosquitos...I HATE mosquitos....sorry, had to get that out. ok..deep breath...there's a term in Jazz music this reminds me of, 'Ugly Beauty' where through a very dissonant melody and chordal structure something beautiful emerges that no one can see coming. Thelonious Monk all the way. or a swamp covered in mushrooms somehow conjures a very beautiful image in my head, I almost wish I knew how to paint, it's that vivid:)
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Date: 8/1/2009 7:50:00 PM
A poet contemplating, the poetry of nature- Well Done! poet butterfly
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:30:00 PM
I love how you use the naming of things to create a poem. It works well because of how it sounds. I like poetry that recognises, as this does, that it doesn't have to mean anything, it just is. A lovely musical poem that creates so much for the reader.
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:09:00 PM
The swamps seethe with the many parts of the body of it's whole, as one. You'll have to grade me on this one? Lol, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:27:00 PM
love the "seethes" Deb!!!! alliteration, tactile images inhabit the reader!!! cool!!!...thanks for comments! couple things!... (my reggae) I need a musician to step-up and set my vibe to sound! I jus' write 'im!!..also, I'll give both boys a shot! then send my limerick challenge off in another direction! if nuthins shakin!!!! jimbo (there's still plenty of 'rick left in this smokin' gun!!!) oh yeaaaa!!! babyyyyyy!!!! AM A LIVIN' BREATHIN' LIMERICK MONSTER!!!
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Date: 7/31/2009 2:56:00 PM
lightening rhyming =D=D jojojojo pretty colorful indeed @.@ thanks a lot for the experience =D=D
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Date: 7/31/2009 2:23:00 PM
Deborah - I feel the misty, musty heat of the swamp! What a descriptive poem. So many wonderful words and phrases in it. I look forward to reading more.
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:47:00 PM
Deborah this is an amazingly well written poem - a true example of exactly why I had to squeeze poetry classes into my schedule at college - So much i wish to learn - wonderful work hon - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:44:00 PM
Awesome poem Deborah,...the hot bright and boiling delight really makes this poetry delightful in its own right ! TY for sharing this write,and again for inspiring my poetry ! james
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