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Seeing Through the Caribou

The saga set In blinding light Upon a barren stage Players hunter and prey Eyes the marrow of this bone Peering thought the slit aperture The nuance of the scene Otherwise lost to a midnight sun Sharp and cold as the landscape itself He surveys The old hunter can attest To the proclivity of the caribou To their and his own temerity Making these grueling migrations to feed their family The sun descends A no show He removes his ilgaak and walks off stage *Ilgaak - Inuktitut, snow goggles carved from bone, antler or driftwood 11/05/18 For John Hamilton's Eight Word Challenge Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:27:00 AM
Maureen, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/2/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Eve :) warm wishes <3 xomo
Date: 11/30/2018 8:34:00 PM
I enjoyed your stirring, wilderness imagery with the excellent use of the required words, Maureen. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/1/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Sandra! :) xomo
Date: 11/30/2018 12:52:00 PM
Very stirring, the age-old battle of the hunt - congratulations on your win!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/1/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Michelle :)) xomo!
Date: 11/28/2018 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win Mo
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/29/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :) xomo
Date: 11/28/2018 2:22:00 PM
Hey! Hey! You penned these words in such a wonderful way! Congrats on your win in the contest, Maureen. Peace and joy! ~ Gershon
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/29/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thank you my friend! I'm tickled pink, this piece special to me. Love and hugs! xomo
Date: 11/27/2018 8:08:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Mo - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/28/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Sweet G :~} This was a crazy challenge! It sent me! Happy holidays to you my friend, well wishes <3 xomo
Date: 11/27/2018 7:14:00 PM
Congrats!!! my lovely friend on your shared top win...great entry...love & light...^WW^
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/28/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you my friend :) xomo!
Date: 11/27/2018 4:37:00 PM
Mesmerizing write Mo thoroughly enjoyed transported me to a different place, thanks for that, congrats on a shared top win!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/28/2018 8:29:00 AM
I'm thrilled you liked it John, thank you! Thank you for sending my muse. Your challenge proved a gripping experience. I love it when a contest prompt does that. :) xomo!
Date: 11/6/2018 3:08:00 PM
Innovated ingeniously and crafted creatively. G.L. in the contest! :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/6/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend! xomo <3
Date: 11/6/2018 8:05:00 AM
The play-like treatment sets off the interesting subject matter really well. Nice one! :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/6/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Bernard! :) xomo
Date: 11/5/2018 6:14:00 PM
Great style you used too
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/6/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :))) xomo!
Date: 11/5/2018 5:57:00 PM
very interesting use of those words you chose. this is a unique poem, Mo
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Date: 11/5/2018 4:02:00 PM
Nicely done Mo, a very poignant balance of man and nature at peace with their roles. I read so interestingly that I lost track of the "required" words.....
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/6/2018 8:00:00 AM
Huzzah! A measurement of success ;) Thank you! xomo
Date: 11/5/2018 3:08:00 PM
This is wonderful- such a unique and inventive subject matter for the contest prompt... Beautiful rendered, Mo! ;)
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you! I couldn't see anywhere else for those eight words to go ;) xomo!

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