Seeing

Seeing the world from above
  how strange the blend so obvious;
swirls of fields, mountain and valleys,
  all intermingle and flow easily
fit together less like a puzzle then the whole.

Seeing the world from below
  nothing seems fluid;
each piece a separate entity
  still and stationary in place
sole survivors in a solitary wasteland.

Seeing outside the flow of the city
  suburbia grows uncontrolled;
steel away the earth, trees and sky
  so that even night
steals the moon and stars from the eye.

Seeing goes beyond this world
  so that life is immersed;
drawn away from creation and nature
  leaving behind and a look back to see
all that made it living and alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kgaswane Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Hi DM Babbit. Beautiful poem. I love the flow. Regsrds. Mpho Kgaswane.
Turner Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 4:50 PM
A very enigmatic write, DM I read it twice and I'm still not sure I understand. I hope that doesn't hurt your feelings.
Babbit Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 12:10 PM
TY Daniel, not sure where I was going with this one either.
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