Seeds

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I planted a seed in my garden Tenderly nurtured for months I saw a tiny bud yesterday Today it opened into a rose Silken petals of purest white, in the center, scarlet like my heart. We planted a seed in my garden Tenderly nurtured for nine months We saw a tiny bud six months ago Today she became a rose Silken hair of golden maize She now owns our scarlet hearts.

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White Sage

Date: 3/15/2016 6:28:00 AM

can i get that seed? i need it too...lol, blessings to the new flower in your garden, and this is a lovely write too

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2016 6:59:00 AM

MY new flower is actually a grandson with big blue eyes. Thanks a lot, Sage.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/11/2016 8:22:00 AM

You already know I'm a fan. This is just another example of your wonderful insight of beauty shown with your tenderness. My love to you, dear Peaches:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2016 8:58:00 AM

and I thank you very much for that. Enjoy your day, Danny. I'm trying to stay dry.