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Sedoka Contest

she, my eyes now view trickle, in delightful slide translucent droplets befall be that towel true placing, tracing, gracing guide her curvaceousness thralls, calls Written 08/01/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:14:00 PM

James,, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2016 12:04:00 PM

Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2016 4:06:00 PM

sexy one!!! Congrats in the contest, James.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/18/2016 11:15:00 AM

James, many thanks for being a part of my contest, congrats on your placement *smiles*-luloo

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 10:48:00 AM

JAMES, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/9/2016 10:07:00 AM

At first, I thought you had a baby wrapped in an adorable hoody towel, but, no - it is a curvaceous woman! Well done ... CayCay

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/9/2016 3:50:00 AM

Hey huge one you made me chuckle and remember one epic line from our holiday: "what's that noise all about? Hahahahahahahaahah but am curvaceous lots of fats now eh... :D tight hugs! You are good in making imageries that tickle anyone who may read ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2016 10:05:00 PM

hmmm, I think you are writing about Olive!! (are you guys together this moment?)

Elaine George

Date: 1/8/2016 4:32:00 PM

I am not familiar with this form, James, so I will go study it now and maybe try one. I do love the verse!!

James Fraser
Date: 1/9/2016 12:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Elaine, hugs xx James

Constance La France

Date: 1/8/2016 4:14:00 PM

James a very sensual Sedoka I love it 7

James Fraser
Date: 1/9/2016 12:45:00 PM

Hiya BW :) - thank you for liking my short write. Blessed weekend to you ~~ hugs ~~ James x

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/8/2016 4:03:00 PM

Oh...you pen drips lustful intoxication..:)

James Fraser
Date: 1/9/2016 12:38:00 PM

Hey Casarah, you are indeed a stranger! - Many thanks for your always kind comments ~~ James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/8/2016 3:57:00 PM

A most lovely and seductive picture you paint with these words, James! You did not need a visual to accompany this poem! ~ paul

James Fraser
Date: 1/9/2016 12:28:00 PM

Blessed evening to you Paul. Indeed, no visuals required when ones mind can paint ~~ James ~~ :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2016 3:56:00 PM

she is a delight on your eyes James and soon you will be united forever - lovely sedoka good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 1/9/2016 11:39:00 AM

Hiya Jan, blessed evening to you :) - Yes, she's captured my heart forever. Thank you always for your lovely comments ~~ hugs ~~ James xx