Sedoka Contest

she, my eyes now view trickle, in delightful slide translucent droplets befall be that towel true placing, tracing, gracing guide her curvaceousness thralls, calls Written 08/01/2016
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A   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:14 PM
James,, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 4:06 PM
sexy one!!! Congrats in the contest, James.
Scars Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 11:15 AM
James, many thanks for being a part of my contest, congrats on your placement *smiles*-luloo
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:48 AM
JAMES, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
Godwin Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 10:07 AM
At first, I thought you had a baby wrapped in an adorable hoody towel, but, no - it is a curvaceous woman! Well done ... CayCay
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Hey huge one you made me chuckle and remember one epic line from our holiday: "what's that noise all about? Hahahahahahahaahah but am curvaceous lots of fats now eh... :D tight hugs! You are good in making imageries that tickle anyone who may read ~Olive Eloisa =`)
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:05 PM
hmmm, I think you are writing about Olive!! (are you guys together this moment?)
George   Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:32 PM
I am not familiar with this form, James, so I will go study it now and maybe try one. I do love the verse!!
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you so much Elaine, hugs xx James
La France Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:14 PM
James a very sensual Sedoka I love it 7
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Hiya BW :) - thank you for liking my short write. Blessed weekend to you ~~ hugs ~~ James x
Nance Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Oh...you pen drips lustful intoxication..:)
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Hey Casarah, you are indeed a stranger! - Many thanks for your always kind comments ~~ James :)
Callus Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:57 PM
A most lovely and seductive picture you paint with these words, James! You did not need a visual to accompany this poem! ~ paul
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Blessed evening to you Paul. Indeed, no visuals required when ones mind can paint ~~ James ~~ :)
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:56 PM
she is a delight on your eyes James and soon you will be united forever - lovely sedoka good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Hiya Jan, blessed evening to you :) - Yes, she's captured my heart forever. Thank you always for your lovely comments ~~ hugs ~~ James xx
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