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Secrets To Keep

A love affair with secrets to keep Broken vows and rendezvous Pillow talk and in too steep Love triangles, a dangerous brew Chasing passion in secret places With deep desires and embraces Love has many turns and twists Hearts astray entwined in trysts But love is never guaranteed Entanglements and lusty needs Someone's love can be hard to measure But fickle hearts can steal love's treasure 11-1-2021 ''S'' Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme Word: Secrets

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2021 3:53:00 PM

wow, I always try to keep up with your poems, but this is a really nice one that sure got past me. Congrats in Dear Heart's contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2021 4:30:00 AM

A lovely poem Joseph, in a triangle it is very sad because 2 of the three are normally married and start an illicit affair, best of luck in the contest. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/10/2021 7:40:00 AM

Well written Joseph. Congratulations :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/6/2021 6:05:00 AM

Joseph, wonderful, lovely writing and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "S" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Joseph May
Date: 11/6/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/6/2021 12:47:00 AM

" Love has many turns and twists Hearts astray entwined in trysts" -beautiful lines and great truth. The whole poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/5/2021 2:01:00 PM

Excellent entry for the contest Joseph. I hope this is a top winner for you. Being faithful has it rich rewards both here and in the afterlife. Blessings xxoo

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/4/2021 12:29:00 AM

Fine writing, full of emotions. Well penned Joseph

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/3/2021 9:03:00 PM

"Love triangles, a dangerous brew" So true. It is never wise to get tangled up with someone that enjoys twisting in sneaky secrets. This is so beautifully written and presented. Hugs, Brandy

Anselmo Boles

Date: 11/1/2021 3:12:00 PM

Humans seem to have a knack for getting entangled in imbroglios. A natural trait, or human invention? Great write! Cheers...ab