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Secrets of a Long Marriage

SECRETS OF A LONG MARRIAGE dumb luck, tops the list. one is blind one can’t hear hubby hides in the cave whilst wifey sips, the wine - every other year like vinegar but the blushing bride years, warm like brandy. she keeps her mouth shut like a lion’s cage, when he places rings upon her table - she wipes them clean sighs, rolls her eyes, sips some more of the vine. the secret’s in the divinity of the vine, the words that sing and heal, hand in hand they rise every Sunday to live in harmony. 12/1/2017

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Date: 12/2/2017 5:44:00 AM
Ah, the wisdom of a woman ... who can gainsay that, I sure can't. Powerful poetry, Kim. Insightful and humorous take on the power of forgiveness, how it is the nitro fuel for marital longevity. Ty for sharing your love and knowledge as always, my dear friend. Star bright write. Love and joy always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Freddie, and your comments in turn make me smile :) Blessings!
Date: 12/1/2017 10:32:00 PM
Good sense of humour, well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thanks, Line :)
Date: 12/1/2017 9:48:00 AM
It's difficult to say, with so many expectations along the way...One thing for sure, nothing is forever, we live and die...short or long... All the best Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 9:57:00 AM
For sure, Arturo, and whatever good we are blessed with. (Hugs)
Date: 12/1/2017 8:01:00 AM
It's def the wine !! So fun Kim, Happy Friday!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Mike ;)
Date: 12/1/2017 7:52:00 AM
The secret is out--dumb luck definitely part of it--I like the hand of divinity you portrayed in the last stanza.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 7:55:00 AM
Anyone that claims to know the secret...lol! Because some have appeared to be happy for a very long time until something happens to break the pattern. Thank you, Vijay!

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