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Secrets

Something lies deep inside A secret you want to keep You toss and turn late at night It wakes you while you sleep You try to hide whats locked inside And make it go away But beneath the skin you locked it in The secret kept at bay You held it in, but it's out again To terrorize your dreams You thought you held it deep inside But it's broken out it seems Without a care you stand and stare The thoughts rip through your head With all the things that fill your mind And secrets left unsaid So roll the dice and pay the price The secrets take thier toll There is nothing left that you can do And no one to save your soul Steve D Crabtree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/14/2016 6:26:00 AM
Mysterious and epic!
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Date: 5/23/2009 11:43:00 PM
Steve, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:50:00 PM
Congrats Steven on "Secrets" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/23/2009 8:27:00 AM
What an excellent piece of work Steve, its heading to my favs, and well done on it being featured - so deserved, James
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:47:00 PM
Wow! Steve, your poem is power packed. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing. Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:48:00 AM
Great write here, Steve and good advice! We have a saying in AA: "You're only as sick as your secrets". Awesome writing and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:37:00 AM
Steve ... there is always a pandora to open the box ... there is always a poet to confront reality with only knife of words ... and I am only here to congratulate you, master poet, on your being featured this week.
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Date: 5/20/2009 5:26:00 PM
I quite like this poem........its very true as well
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Date: 5/20/2009 9:07:00 AM
We can’t do but keep some secrets… this piece is awesome… I love the great rhymes and alliteration. Your pen is great. Please keep writing… Correct the following spellings ‘through’ line 14 and ‘their’ line 18 Congrats on a well deserved feature. . ‘Leke
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 5:33:00 AM
Steve,..awesome,..just awesome,..I love this poem ! Congrats on its feature this week ! james
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your featured poem. Ernilando
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:14:00 PM
Sad situation. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/5/2009 7:46:00 PM
this has a very nice flow to it..good work. BG
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Date: 5/5/2009 4:39:00 PM
I have a Secrets poem....and i understand what is being said here....I hide all my secrets, and it never letsme rest....then you gain other people's secrets, and they eat you up....You need to release you secrets before you contain in others.....so it's okay to trust someone to tell them to.
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