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Secret paths

A lamp post casts a shadow Could we tip toe into those slivers of space where opposites are true? Breathe the air trapped beneath the sea? Look and see everything in the moment lightning flashes? When our hearing is dampened by the loudness of the drums - find the frequency which remains... I don't know, I just know opposites are sometimes true.

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David Kavanagh

Date: 1/22/2024 9:13:00 AM

Perhaps those slivers of space are already occupied, and slightly fazed just outside of our time, on a different (frequency), yes it’s all becoming clearer now, overlaps rather than opposites, you’re almost there Dilly, don’t let the secret out, brilliant! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/22/2024 2:48:00 PM

I just need an interpreter or a while longer to learn the lingo - thanks David, always enjoy your insights on my musings :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/22/2024 8:56:00 AM

I can't say the opposite for this poem because it is good and artfully penned. It seems to dance, like a future time unsure

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/22/2024 2:46:00 PM

Thank you Hilda, I like capturing passing thoughts - there's sometimes something in them :)

Daisy Meadows

Date: 1/22/2024 7:25:00 AM

Interesting poem. Well done.

Daisy Meadows
Date: 1/23/2024 7:50:00 AM

Yes, I sometimes have ideas at such random times. Have a good day.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/22/2024 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Jeanette - I appreciate you stopping by to comment. It was just something I wrote walking down the street - funny little ideas occur when there isn't anything else demanding our attention x