Secret Grace of Nature

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In the depths of space, matter hidden grace Creates a constant flow of time and place Despite gravity strong and tight embrace Existence magic shines with a potent cosmic race. From galaxies to stars, dust to planets, Matter hidden grace shapes every life and habit. Light, heat, and air are all gifts from sunlight. It's a source of life and never-ending delight. Even in the tiniest particles, we cannot foresee Matter hidden grace is the key. To unlock the secrets of the universe mystery And reveal the beauty of its harmony. So let us marvel at nature hidden grace. And cherish the gifts it bestows upon our space. For in its infinite forms and infinite places. We find the essence of life's astounding traces. Written: June 08, 2023

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Valsa George

Date: 6/8/2023 7:20:00 PM

"So let us marvel at nature hidden grace. And cherish the gifts it bestows upon our space." Nature has immense grace. At the same time we cannot fathom into the mysteries of the universe. You have presented the beauty of the cosmos in your poem, made more beautiful by your great rhyming. Grear job dear friend !

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/8/2023 2:00:00 PM

You did a fabulous job of presenting the wonderment of nature, our galaxies and that of higher hand orchestrating the entire mix. To do so in rhyming verse quite a feat my friend. One that I so enjoyed reading. God bless...