Season's Wings

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A blast of winter Another storm brings beauty Now brightness, sunshine and snow Competing with spring when the crocus say hello Beauty blooms with season’s wings Heidi Sands 1/21/23

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Robertina B.

Date: 1/21/2023 6:45:00 PM

Such an exquisite poem, Heidi.. Imagery is exceptional and excellent! The photo is breathtaking.. Many blessings to you dear Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2023 7:17:00 PM

Thank you Robert ina. Blessings :(

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2023 1:43:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your Sedoka. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I think crocus is a beautiful specimen, but I have never had any luck with them. I guess it doesn't get cold enough here for them. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2023 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Sara and you are welcome :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/21/2023 12:23:00 PM

Heidi, this is a lovely poem, and the imagery is wonderful. A flower opens its petals amidst the wintry splendor.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2023 12:37:00 PM

Thank you Sotto :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2023 11:03:00 AM

Amid winter beauty--a flower blooming. A beautiful poem--splendid images, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2023 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. The Sedoka form requires the contrast :)