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I love Winter time when it snows and blows ice frozen flakes, it is sublime to go for a walk by snow covered lakes, I used go on nature hikes with dad, that memory aches; at Christmas always grandma made to amaze cookies and cakes ! Oh nothing is more divine than the sunshine in the Spring, the warm breezes and sweet flowers blooming make my heart sing, how pretty is a butterfly or a hummingbird wing; as a kid I loved the parks- I would run and skid and swing ! Summer is time for a dress and guess I will plant flowers, time for picnics and barbeques and praying for no showers, for camping and mountain hikes and praying to the powers; garden blooming though bugs consuming- string beans are towers ! Beautiful Fall I love you best of all for the red and gold, for the stained fluttering leaves that wither and fold, for those long walks in the morning when all is still and cold; and a cozy fire to admire with a red wine bold ! ________________________________ November 2, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Seasons Sublime Copyright Protected, ID 11-1299-846-02 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, In Rhymes Sublime sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 11/19/20 First Place

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Date: 11/20/2020 9:49:00 AM
Love your rhyming journey through the seasons, Constance - very creative approach - so happy to see it on the winners list. You also walk us through some beautiful memories of each season. Sending you harvest blessings and a hug!
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:38:00 AM
Sam, thank you for the lovely comment and hugs _Constance
Date: 11/20/2020 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:38:00 AM
Sara, thanks so much for the congrats _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 5:55:00 PM
This is gorgeous. I'd expect nothing less. Congratuations, Dear heart.
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:39:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 11:48:00 AM
Well done and congrats on your contest winner!
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:39:00 AM
Jenna, thanks for the compliment and congrats _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 10:35:00 AM
Constance I love your poem, congratulations on your wonderful win and for taking me on a walk through the seasons of a year. You are very talented. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:39:00 AM
Jennifer, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 7:57:00 AM
Nice hike through the seasons. I like the last stanza best...Fall is my favorite, and that bold red wine is also a favorite :) Congratulations on the win Constance! Linda
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:40:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the lovely comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 6:00:00 AM
A lovely stroll through the seasons Constance, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:41:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement and congrats _Constance
Date: 11/4/2020 12:57:00 AM
Lovely walk through all the seasons, Constance, I love it and so will Joseph:)
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:19:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the encouragement, I hope Joseph likes it too _Constance
Date: 11/3/2020 11:48:00 AM
this is indeed sublime - love it. Thanks, my friend - so pleased you liked the poem x
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:20:00 AM
Jack, thank you for visiting and the compliment, and you are welcome on your win _Constance
Date: 11/2/2020 2:57:00 PM
Hello Constance la France, this poem is beautifully created. Summer is my favourite season. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 11/3/2020 3:15:00 PM
Hello Constance, yes they do smell devine. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 11/3/2020 11:23:00 AM
Darlene, I agree the raking part is not so pretty, but they smell divine _Constance
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/2/2020 3:56:00 PM
Hello Constance La France, I like the color of Fall. I do not like to rake leaves. Summe is my favourite season. Your friend Darlene
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Date: 11/2/2020 3:12:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for the compliment and for the visit, I like all the colors of Fall the best _Constance

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