Seasons Passing

A silky moonlight the water walking
As lovers entwined their lives while talking.
Spring softly warm, blossoms upon the air,
Time's gentle memory when she was there.

Stars bright after sunlight reveled in youth
Or might we more have considered the truth
Of philosophy and kisses so bare
That perhaps we gave too much to the air.

To summer we could not forever cling,
Must autumn mean loss, must it perforce bring
A harsh threat of change, hint of winter stark,
As a cold, still gun may glint in the dark.

All energy we find within a thought
Of what Fate bought, of what we might have wrought.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 4:50 PM
I enjoyed reading this one, Doug. Thank you for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K
Pathak Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 1:03 AM
A beautiful poem that needs no more to say
Pinet Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 8:55 AM
I like this poem ..it flows well the word choices are excellent and the theme is consistent throughout. Emile.
Vinson Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Hey Emile. : ) Thank you.
Hoose Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Doug my friend you have the most lovely way with words that touch ones heart so as well as to paint images on the page for your readers to see all that you see. You have a follower in this country girl...:) A '7' for sure. Big country hugs and smiles to you my lovely friend...Mary :)
Vinson Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Wow, Mary. : ) Cheers, Doug.
Lindley Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 8:28 AM
A truly exceptional sonnet!!! Simply floors me with its great depth, smooth flow and purity in thought. Super 10 and a fav...
Lindley Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 4:05 PM
They are done when the poet pronounces them so. For no other gets to declare such, as that is the author's right only ! Others may not, neither by criticisms or declarations of saying perfect form not met, IMHO.. SONNETS AS OTHER POEMS ARE MESSAGE DRIVEN--GET THY MESSAGE OUT TO THY OWN SATISFACTION - THEN DECLARE THE POEM DONE.. Yours was a wondrous piece as it was presented. And you are welcome my friend.
Vinson Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Robert! I have to say that sonnets scare me - they take work and it never seems to be done; they are always somewhat imperfect, needing more work, always to fall short of some ideal.
Ricci Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 4:22 AM
To put it simply Doug this entry is stunning and beautiful not to mention a wonderful sonnet and its title. We can not get back yesterday but we have today and her memories. Well done
Vinson Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Thanks, Bluebird. : )
Herlihy Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 1:20 AM
I love almost as much what is left unsaid as what is said. A very disciplined poem. John
Vinson Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Cheers, John. I had never written a sonnet, didn't even remember what one was - if I'd ever known - until I came to PoetrySoup 3 months ago. I am conflicted about that "discipline." I grant that there is value in the constraints of many poetic forms, but once in a while I like to run outside with a poetic gun filled with words and just let loose at the sky.
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Lovely sonnet, Doug. #7 Time waits for no one, and it's not advisable to brood on the past and what could have been; let's make the most of what lies ahead! ~ Regards // paul
Vinson Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 3:08 AM
You are right, of course, Paul, but that's often easier said than done, as we are such creatures of our experiences. And as we age, the future becomes compressed, while the past, right or wrong, is a vast, broad lawn, velvety in its surety.
Vaso Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Sometimes I have no words, I just really loved the poem!
Vinson Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:56 PM
: ) A fine compliment, Arthur!
Burch Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Keep fighting that crocodile Doug, and "pang-a-rang"!!! ;) big Hugggs!!! Deb
Vinson Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:55 PM
Ahoy Deb. : ) I have to laugh - yeah, the fight goes on.
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 11:40 PM
I nearly missed this one, Doug! Glad I didn't! Great modern sonnet mate!
Vinson Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Cheers, my friend. : )
Green Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Hey man, nice to see you again. Loved your piece today, this one is something many, including myself, will relate to. Time passes quickly it seems, seasons change, whether we do or not. Some days it hard to keep up.
Vinson Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Hey Chris, yes - that rampant ticking of the clock...
Turner Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:52 PM
I'm a sucker for a good sonnet, Doug. Just isn't enough time to do everything. With the seasons blending so smoothly, we hardly notice until winter rolls around.
Vinson Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Aye Danny, indeed. That rolling around of the seasons - one of the best things about being alive.
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