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Seasons of Love

Spring fling raining innocent falling with the stars descent all for young love's sake Holding hands each minute spent strolling paths with beauty's scent in sweet floral wake A soft touch was the intent no turning back to prevent desire's burning ache Temptation, our lips partake of passion's kiss, love to make blazing in the night Embraced near a moonlit lake summer love, a fierce earthquake of intense delight Electricity does shake heightened feelings, hearts will break fire consumed in flight Brittle in the autumn's light bits and pieces fall from sight heart of blue paper Gone, the flicker to ignite my singed corners once were white summer love tapers Shadowed heart no longer bright shredded from love's clouded plight seasonal vapors

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/10/2012 6:13:00 PM
Help, help me; Rhonda! A tendered song to celebrate a truly, seasonal-romantic interloper! Loved the romantic vibe in this poem!
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:07:00 AM
An awesome write in this difficult form Rhonda!Congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on a fantastic poem.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:03:00 AM
passion's delight, rhonda... congrats on your top spot!.:) huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 8:57:00 AM
You adopted this form and turned it into something sensual and delightful. Congratulations on a task you turned into a joy. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 8/7/2012 7:57:00 AM
congrats on a great win Rhonda
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win xx
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:33:00 AM
Congrats, Rhonda, on the 1st place win with this awesome write! Jag
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Date: 8/7/2012 3:57:00 AM
Rhonda big congrats on your winning poem it was excellent...David
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Date: 6/27/2012 6:55:00 PM
Beautiful piece - you really know relationships, although i hope my marriage doesn't reach that final stage! lol! Love how you describe how love is fleeting in that last line :) soupmail
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Date: 6/26/2012 4:06:00 PM
thoroughly enjoyed this, sultry and sensual from "spring fling" all the way through to autumn, great rhyming, great poem :-)
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:04:00 PM
there you go again, being like me, sweetie. I have several ;poems where I compare love to the changing of the seasons, spring/innocence, summer/passion and autumn the dying out. This is wonderful. It seems like it might be one of those new forms, the one of David's? He loves romance so this is going to do SO well on the winners' list!
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Date: 6/23/2012 5:39:00 PM
wonderful poem, love elizabeth
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Date: 6/23/2012 4:18:00 PM
What a fantastic write! Rhonda this is absolutely wonderful! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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