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Twilight New Moon Aesthetic Wallpaper - Novocom.top

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*Image of Twilight New Moon by Novocom. AUDIO: Soundtrack from the film, 'The Evening Star' with Shirley MacLaine and Jack Nicholson Seasonings Summer twilight dawns an evening crown surfers lounged alongside boards, lain atop cooling sands chatter swapped to suggestive feeble snores, true lifers naught workers cresting ripples o'er sandy shore molded whimsy sandcastles to mounds Trivial zephyr abroad builds, tapping cliffs sweeping inland indulging effortlessly till slighted by few existing shanties heeding opened windows lissome brushes, tonal effects quietude to life September morn declares its golden hues to arrest savoring eyes yellow accents twirling oranges respite alongside crumpled reds vibrant picturesque displays an artisans portrait Mobility afoot, gathering sorts of the anticipating talented, fervid hunch transitions a time as creation spurs onward whilst we embellish capturing the day as it occasions our pleasure, we fail ... pleasing Him, our reward. 2021 August 04 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND 1096 ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 26 *2nd Place* Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces ~~Constance La France: Judged 2021 August 13

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 5:09:00 AM

Written in a free flowing way. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/27/2022 11:52:00 AM

I am appreciative, Christuraj, and my wholehearted compliments with your imbued sparkled words in Edward's contest. Cheers my friend, Aloha~William

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2021 8:29:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look beautiful, well done, I like the image chosen and the lovely music too ~Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2021 11:53:00 AM

I am glad, Constance, as I thought this tune allows readers a well-balanced perspective. Thanks again for the opportunity as this was a magical ride for me my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 9:13:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest . Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 9:17:00 PM

Eve, my gratitude for your sharing and a shout-out for you as well, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/13/2021 11:35:00 AM

Amazing, vibrant picture my friend! This poem moves like the power and swell of the Hawaiian ocean on the shore. As always powerful vivid images that tell the story. Congratulations my friend on your win! Aloha! Here's to perfect waves!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 12:53:00 PM

Bonding with the surfers that time reinvents via memories, Sam, a neverending thankfulness for your laurels of praise for the versifications that I had tendered my friend, Aloha!!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/13/2021 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, William. You deserve it with this great poem. The imagery, metaphors, and exquisite poetic lines were beautiful. Blessings, my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 11:52:00 AM

A wealth of welcoming words, Lasaad, truly I am blessed with your gifts of thoughtfulness, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/13/2021 8:12:00 AM

A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 9:49:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, your thoughts know no bounds my friend, Aloha!