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Seasonal Transitions

Proud daffodils have bowed their weary heads And roses shed their petals one by one, Green leaves transform to gold and fiery reds The gilded reign of autumn has begun. Farewell to fragrant bluebell woods of spring And summer’s lush and verdant meadow grass, In vain, tenacious leaves to branches cling: The changing scenes of life must come to pass. As nights draw in, the silver harvest moon Shines boldly through defenceless, naked trees And pirouetting leaves will settle soon, For winter’s riding on the autumn breeze. The reaper’s joyful song in golden fields Begins to fade as Fall to winter yields. 26.10.19 New Fall Sonnets Poetry Contest : sponsored by Emile Pinet N-A Rerun 4 Poetry Contest :sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 2/10/2022 9:50:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:56:00 AM
So beautifully stated, Wendy with such creative wording and images. Congratulations on your win! Charming and lovely! Sending you the blessings of each season.
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Date: 1/24/2021 6:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Wendy. Many congrats on your fine win. ~ Eaine
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Date: 1/3/2021 2:51:00 AM
Another lovely sonnet Wendy. Beautifully descriptive. I felt I was there; looking on and observing the transitions around me.
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Date: 4/19/2020 12:29:00 PM
..............Beautiful. A lovely verse on the coming, my favorite season Fall. And the final transition to winter. The last four lines of this are wonderfully scribed. Congratulations
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/1/2021 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for such encouraging comments, JC.
Date: 4/16/2020 11:59:00 PM
I do so love your sonnets, dear Wendy, and this one does proper justice to the sights and sounds of seasons changing. Well done on your win!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/17/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, John. I read one of yours yesterday which was so beautiful and I'm about to re-visit to have the pleasure of reading again.
Date: 12/22/2019 3:03:00 PM
Wendy congrats on your win!;)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/8/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you,Brenda.
Date: 12/22/2019 2:16:00 PM
What a beautiful sonnet Wendy hard to believe this got an N/A, not this time around, congrats on a fine win!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/8/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. I really appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/19/2019 5:30:00 AM
"For Winter's riding on the Autumn breeze" That's my favorite line. Loved it, and I see this write was already a winner for you...congratulations.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/8/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Lin for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 12/1/2019 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations Wendy! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/8/2020 3:18:00 PM
I'm delighted, Emile. Thank you for appreciating my efforts.
Date: 10/26/2019 6:13:00 PM
Great Sonnet. Fantastic imagery. Inspiring.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/28/2019 1:18:00 PM
What a lovely comment. Thank you for the encouragement,Frank.

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