Wendy Watson Poet Rhyme

Seasonal Changes

Proud daffodils have bowed their weary heads
And roses shed their petals one by one,
Green leaves transform to gold and fiery reds
The gilded reign of autumn has begun.

19.12.19


An extract taken from my poem 'seasonal transitions'

Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest  sponsored by Gregory Barden

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James Inman January 17, 2020 at 5:38 PM I love the way you've written this Wendy.

Peter Rees January 15, 2020 at 7:05 AM The changing seasons so beautifully and succinctly described. I really enjoyed your lines.

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2020 at 3:02 PM I am back to congratulate you on your win Wendy. A lovely vision. xxoo

Dale Gregory Cozart January 14, 2020 at 10:24 AM Beautiful, Wendy. Congrats on your win.

Gary Radice December 29, 2019 at 5:58 AM The picture you have managed to paint inside my mind with just 4 lines makes your poem that more remarkable for me. A great read.

Line Gauthier December 27, 2019 at 8:30 AM Lovely poem, Wendy. Congrats on your POTD.

Silent One December 26, 2019 at 2:23 PM Great imagery...Congrats on pOtd

Connie Marcum Wong December 25, 2019 at 2:58 AM This is gorgeous Wendy! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! It is sure to do well in the contest. I want to wish you and your family a wonderful holiday. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo

Heidi Sands December 24, 2019 at 5:50 AM This is beautiful Wendy and congratulations for the POTD you received :)

Na Na December 22, 2019 at 4:42 AM Congrats on your POTD Vincent

Jennifer Proxenos December 21, 2019 at 10:24 PM Congratulations Wendy.a wonderful poem and a wonderful honor bestowed upon you of POTD. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell December 21, 2019 at 3:40 PM Such a nice seasonal piece Wendy, so well penned indeed! Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:49 PM That's very kind of you, Gordon. I wonder how the POTD is chosen as it's not received faves as far as I know and is such a short piece.

Warren Doll December 21, 2019 at 2:39 PM Beautiful description of seasonal change, Wendy. Congratulations on POTD. Warmest Wishes~Warren Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:50 PM Thank you so much for your kind comments, though I wonder how this small sample of the whole poem was chosen.

Brandy Nicole December 21, 2019 at 2:19 PM It is such a magical moment indeed. Watching one season meet the next. The changing of colors, the beauty of it all. You have created a masterpiece. The images you paint are breathtaking. Congratulations Wendy, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:52 PM Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such encouraging comments,Nicole. I'd love to know what criteria they use to choose though!

Sunlite Wanter December 21, 2019 at 10:35 AM The "Seasonal Changes" just fit our changes here. The writing is just right. Congratulations! Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 4:00 PM Thank you for taking the time to comment, Sunlite.

Joseph May December 21, 2019 at 9:33 AM Beautiful Wendy, Congrats on POTD Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:59 PM Thanks for your continued encouragement,Joseph.

Constance La France December 21, 2019 at 8:24 AM Wendy, your poem is lovely and congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor ~ Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:58 PM Thank you Dear Heart though I'm bemused as to how this small segment of a whole poem was allocated the honour.

Winged Warrior December 21, 2019 at 7:21 AM Lovely extract Wendy...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...and Happy! Holidays!...^WW^ :o) Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:58 PM Thank you so much and Happy Christmas to you too, WW.

Tom Cunningham December 21, 2019 at 4:11 AM A poem in its own right, congrats on POTD Wendy and Merry Christmas. Tom. Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:57 PM That's a nice comment, Tom. Thank you for all the encouraging feedback that you have given me since I joined the site and Happy Christmas to you and family too.

Na Na December 21, 2019 at 3:57 AM Congrats on POTD Wendy Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:56 PM Thank you for all your encouragement throughout the past few months, Gregory.

Lin Lane December 19, 2019 at 5:28 AM You've made it easy to imagine the scene, Wendy. I have to read the poem in its entirety now. Well wishes in the contest. Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:56 PM Thank you so much, Lin and for the desire to read on!

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 19, 2019 at 1:45 AM Such an enjoyable Pastoral poem, Wendy! Please post your poem, "Seasonal Transitions." Visually serene poetry. Love and more love always. Wendy Watson December 21, 2019 at 3:55 PM That's kind of you, Freddie. You can read the whole poem on my list of poems.