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Seasonal Changes

Proud daffodils have bowed their weary heads
And roses shed their petals one by one,
Green leaves transform to gold and fiery reds
The gilded reign of autumn has begun.

19.12.19


An extract taken from my poem 'seasonal transitions'

Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest  sponsored by Gregory Barden

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James Inman Date: 1/17/2020 5:38:00 PM I love the way you've written this Wendy. Login to Reply

Peter Rees Date: 1/15/2020 7:05:00 AM The changing seasons so beautifully and succinctly described. I really enjoyed your lines. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/14/2020 3:02:00 PM I am back to congratulate you on your win Wendy. A lovely vision. xxoo Login to Reply

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 1/14/2020 10:24:00 AM Beautiful, Wendy. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Gary Radice Date: 12/29/2019 5:58:00 AM The picture you have managed to paint inside my mind with just 4 lines makes your poem that more remarkable for me. A great read. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 12/27/2019 8:30:00 AM Lovely poem, Wendy. Congrats on your POTD. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/26/2019 2:23:00 PM Great imagery...Congrats on pOtd Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/25/2019 2:58:00 AM This is gorgeous Wendy! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! It is sure to do well in the contest. I want to wish you and your family a wonderful holiday. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 12/24/2019 5:50:00 AM This is beautiful Wendy and congratulations for the POTD you received :) Login to Reply

Na Na Date: 12/22/2019 4:42:00 AM Congrats on your POTD Vincent Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/21/2019 10:24:00 PM Congratulations Wendy.a wonderful poem and a wonderful honor bestowed upon you of POTD. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 12/21/2019 3:40:00 PM Such a nice seasonal piece Wendy, so well penned indeed! Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:49:00 PM That's very kind of you, Gordon. I wonder how the POTD is chosen as it's not received faves as far as I know and is such a short piece.

Warren Doll Date: 12/21/2019 2:39:00 PM Beautiful description of seasonal change, Wendy. Congratulations on POTD. Warmest Wishes~Warren Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:50:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind comments, though I wonder how this small sample of the whole poem was chosen.

Brandy Nicole Date: 12/21/2019 2:19:00 PM It is such a magical moment indeed. Watching one season meet the next. The changing of colors, the beauty of it all. You have created a masterpiece. The images you paint are breathtaking. Congratulations Wendy, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:52:00 PM Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such encouraging comments,Nicole. I'd love to know what criteria they use to choose though!

Sunlite Wanter Date: 12/21/2019 10:35:00 AM The "Seasonal Changes" just fit our changes here. The writing is just right. Congratulations! Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 4:00:00 PM Thank you for taking the time to comment, Sunlite.

Joseph May Date: 12/21/2019 9:33:00 AM Beautiful Wendy, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:59:00 PM Thanks for your continued encouragement,Joseph.

Constance La France Date: 12/21/2019 8:24:00 AM Wendy, your poem is lovely and congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor ~ Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:58:00 PM Thank you Dear Heart though I'm bemused as to how this small segment of a whole poem was allocated the honour.

Winged Warrior Date: 12/21/2019 7:21:00 AM Lovely extract Wendy...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...and Happy! Holidays!...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:58:00 PM Thank you so much and Happy Christmas to you too, WW.

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/21/2019 4:11:00 AM A poem in its own right, congrats on POTD Wendy and Merry Christmas. Tom. Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:57:00 PM That's a nice comment, Tom. Thank you for all the encouraging feedback that you have given me since I joined the site and Happy Christmas to you and family too.

Na Na Date: 12/21/2019 3:57:00 AM Congrats on POTD Wendy Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:56:00 PM Thank you for all your encouragement throughout the past few months, Gregory.

Lin Lane Date: 12/19/2019 5:28:00 AM You've made it easy to imagine the scene, Wendy. I have to read the poem in its entirety now. Well wishes in the contest. Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:56:00 PM Thank you so much, Lin and for the desire to read on!

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/19/2019 1:45:00 AM Such an enjoyable Pastoral poem, Wendy! Please post your poem, "Seasonal Transitions." Visually serene poetry. Love and more love always. Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 12/21/2019 3:55:00 PM That's kind of you, Freddie. You can read the whole poem on my list of poems.