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Seasonal Changes

Proud daffodils have bowed their weary heads And roses shed their petals one by one, Green leaves transform to gold and fiery reds The gilded reign of autumn has begun. 19.12.19 An extract taken from my poem 'seasonal transitions' Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest sponsored by Gregory Barden

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James Inman

Date: 1/17/2020 5:38:00 PM

I love the way you've written this Wendy.

Peter Rees

Date: 1/15/2020 7:05:00 AM

The changing seasons so beautifully and succinctly described. I really enjoyed your lines.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/14/2020 3:02:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you on your win Wendy. A lovely vision. xxoo

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 1/14/2020 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful, Wendy. Congrats on your win.

Gary Radice

Date: 12/29/2019 5:58:00 AM

The picture you have managed to paint inside my mind with just 4 lines makes your poem that more remarkable for me. A great read.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/27/2019 8:30:00 AM

Lovely poem, Wendy. Congrats on your POTD.

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 2:23:00 PM

Great imagery...Congrats on pOtd

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/25/2019 2:58:00 AM

This is gorgeous Wendy! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! It is sure to do well in the contest. I want to wish you and your family a wonderful holiday. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/24/2019 5:50:00 AM

This is beautiful Wendy and congratulations for the POTD you received :)

Na Na

Date: 12/22/2019 4:42:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD Vincent

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2019 10:24:00 PM

Congratulations Wendy.a wonderful poem and a wonderful honor bestowed upon you of POTD. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/21/2019 3:40:00 PM

Such a nice seasonal piece Wendy, so well penned indeed!

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:49:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Gordon. I wonder how the POTD is chosen as it's not received faves as far as I know and is such a short piece.

Warren Doll

Date: 12/21/2019 2:39:00 PM

Beautiful description of seasonal change, Wendy. Congratulations on POTD. Warmest Wishes~Warren

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:50:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comments, though I wonder how this small sample of the whole poem was chosen.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/21/2019 2:19:00 PM

It is such a magical moment indeed. Watching one season meet the next. The changing of colors, the beauty of it all. You have created a masterpiece. The images you paint are breathtaking. Congratulations Wendy, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such encouraging comments,Nicole. I'd love to know what criteria they use to choose though!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/21/2019 10:35:00 AM

The "Seasonal Changes" just fit our changes here. The writing is just right. Congratulations!

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 4:00:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to comment, Sunlite.

Joseph May

Date: 12/21/2019 9:33:00 AM

Beautiful Wendy, Congrats on POTD

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:59:00 PM

Thanks for your continued encouragement,Joseph.

Constance La France

Date: 12/21/2019 8:24:00 AM

Wendy, your poem is lovely and congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor ~

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:58:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart though I'm bemused as to how this small segment of a whole poem was allocated the honour.

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/21/2019 7:21:00 AM

Lovely extract Wendy...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...and Happy! Holidays!...^WW^ :o)

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:58:00 PM

Thank you so much and Happy Christmas to you too, WW.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2019 4:11:00 AM

A poem in its own right, congrats on POTD Wendy and Merry Christmas. Tom.

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:57:00 PM

That's a nice comment, Tom. Thank you for all the encouraging feedback that you have given me since I joined the site and Happy Christmas to you and family too.

Na Na

Date: 12/21/2019 3:57:00 AM

Congrats on POTD Wendy

Wendy Watson
Date: 12/21/2019 3:56:00 PM

Thank you for all your encouragement throughout the past few months, Gregory.