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Fall leaves are changing colors a strong wind is blowing The leaves are falling and spreading raking

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Date: 11/15/2023 10:43:00 AM
Hello dear lovely Darlene! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, have a great day, AA.
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:34:00 PM
Hello Abodullah, You ar4e welcome. enjko0y your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/14/2023 6:55:00 PM
raking --- the bottom line. Smiles, gw
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:33:00 PM
Yes Gershon raing the dead leaves. Now all done. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/8/2023 5:19:00 PM
Nice Cinquain, Darlene. It is that time of year. Let the raking begin. :-) Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/9/2023 12:28:00 PM
Hello Bill, there is still more raking to be done. So many leaves have not fallen yet. Wishingyou happy raking . My poet friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/8/2023 9:08:00 AM
Such a delightful Cinquain Darlene. A few lines say so much and captures the season perfectly with the leaves in abundance at this time of year. You’ve created lovely imagery. So enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :):)
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:39:00 AM
Hello Cristina, So nice to see you. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. You are very welcome. blessings to you. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/
Date: 11/1/2023 12:39:00 PM
That's Fall alright. Love it. You paint a pretty picture here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/1/2023 3:16:00 PM
Hello Judy, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening. Hugs./Darlene/
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Date: 11/1/2023 3:16:00 PM
God Bless.
Date: 10/31/2023 11:02:00 AM
Sometimes they do appear yet alive, blanketing the earth with gliding beauty and colorful intention. Lovely write!
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Date: 11/1/2023 10:28:00 AM
Hello Joe, yes with the wind blowing them this way and that. It is the leaves aare doing a dance before hitting the ground. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy y9ur day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/31/2023 8:57:00 AM
Darlene, your poem "Fall" is a simple yet beautiful ode to one of nature's most stunning seasons. I love the way you capture the essence of autumn in just a few short lines. The poem is also very evocative, bringing to mind the sound of leaves rustling in the wind and the smell of fresh air. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:41:00 AM
Hello Daniel Henry Rodgers, Thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/29/2023 4:14:00 AM
Hello Darlene,beautiful autumnal pictures!! Have a blessed day!
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Date: 10/29/2023 3:13:00 PM
Hello Mulu, Thank you my friend. Enjoy your evening. Blessings my friend. /Darlene\
Date: 10/28/2023 10:00:00 AM
This is lovely and captured the picture of autumn... have a lovely day dear..
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Date: 10/28/2023 10:23:00 AM
Hello Silent One, Hi, Thank you for this lovely comment my friend. You also enjoy your weekend./darlene\
Date: 10/27/2023 9:06:00 PM
That is about the size of it! I think you might enjoy my poem “Cheerful Red House.” Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:53:00 AM
Hello Kim. I will read your poem. Red House. Hugs. /Darlene\
Date: 10/27/2023 5:34:00 PM
Darlene, you are right. This is great. This is called Autumn that changes the colour of leaves and everything. Wonderful poem. Love Maria
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:52:00 AM
Hello Maria, Yes it is called Autumn. When the leaves change color. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/27/2023 2:29:00 PM
Your "Season" is a lovely write. I love this time of the year. Have a great day/weekend................
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:50:00 AM
Hello Paula, I like the colorful leaves. This time of year. Enjoy your weekend. Paula. Hugs. /Darlene\
Date: 10/27/2023 1:06:00 PM
Great set of words about the changing season. Your imagery is just excellent Darlene, have a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:47:00 AM
Hello Sotto, Thank you fort the lovely comment. Sotto. Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene\

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