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Written on January 20, 2024

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As she sings, the sea agrees to feed the night its breathless light, softer than the fading shadows, silent like the nocturnal words - drifting through eternity, more than fantasy, more than imaginary dreams ~ quote by poet Drifting through this sea of pearlescent energies, Soft feathers from winged warriors float through the skies, Embracing my soul, the enchanted winds stir light, Gently glowing, like the stars on a snow kissed night. As sleep invades this mystery, my mind compels me to see, Through the nocturnal oceans, the depths of eternity, And prayers fade in a quiet promise like trembling fears, Pleading for their own time, their own season, their own seas. Delicate dew falls graceful on the blushing orchid – a tune, Buds clinging to the night, inviting the breath of a kinder sight, Peace floods the moment as somewhere just beyond the darkness, Rises a surge of emotion, beckoning to me like my heart can evade… The gestures of twilight, gallantly blazing through the heavens, Touching the stars, caressing the moon and remembering to imitate, All the pleasures of a nocturnal war where the warriors never die – They live on, through the ballads, fighting for the shadows who bleed… Quietly stirring the moments when fantasy explores the season, Erasing the gloom with proof, fresh truth – imagine the beauty, Poured out on a world where light can be heard, night is beautiful, So we know we should hearken to the hues from oceanic wars.

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Date: 1/20/2024 5:21:00 PM
A stunning poem Regina. It always brings me great joy to read your writings.
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Date: 1/20/2024 11:23:00 AM
Love your poem Gina, it's a captivating journey through the ethereal realms, beautifully weaving together imagery and emotions. The use of vivid language and metaphors creates a dreamlike atmosphere, drawing the reader into a world painted with pearlescent energies and the soft feathers of winged warriors.
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Date: 1/20/2024 9:10:00 AM
I loved the soulful nature of this poem, Gina. Reading it filled me with delight. I agree with Tom's comments, for he said them well...'your writes are dreamy, reverent, and filled with hope. I look forward to reading your poems every day. Hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/20/2024 6:22:00 AM
I have to say, you are one of the premier poets on this site. Your dreamy, often reverent writes depicting nature's wonders are top notch Gina, and this beauty is no exception
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Date: 1/20/2024 3:43:00 AM
Wow this is absolutely stunning and so very deeply moving! I love the way you’ve painted imagery and used metaphors so divine and soulful. I especially loved the lines “ The gestures of twilight, gallantly blazing through the heavens, Touching the stars, caressing the moon and remembering to imitate, All the pleasures of a nocturnal war where the warriors never die –“ definitely a fave! Love it
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