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ages ... years flow between us as two oceans of the world we spin upon yet, just as the earthly abyss we course as one we are blue waters, deep different - ebb and flow - yet the same essence fluid thoughts and movements tugged by the moon but e'er surrounding our earthly intent you are my true north - my constant but not constantly the same our days, marked by the breadths of actuality yet, oh, those extraordinary moments a winding river of passion, I swim sinuous, curving, up into the core of you yearning for your source, your fountain-spring meeting in THAT place, a-swirl sacred moments, brief in time that stretch into infinity, hushed where I no longer know my being's end or the beginning of yours we are twined together ... ONE so universally fused in euphoria that I nearly feel ... alone we are precise, singular, bound-and-bare so exquisitely affiliated that no discernible difference remains - all partitions and segregations, dissolved melted by feelings too complex to emote ... nonetheless ... in all honesty there are times when I question everything when I wonder if you are who you are if I am who you need me to be times when I reach for your soul and it avoids my perceptions ... times when I fail, when I struggle so just to be the cheek to your tears the shore to your surf the reef you break yourself upon when the rest of the world is adoring you and you are incensed by their inability to know your depths when your beauty is the quality you despise: others, who focus their first gaze on you catching breath at your elegance and symmetry - you, enraged by their shallow piety and veneration but even THEN, in your ire and my awe we are perfection, imperfect we are a constellation, burning sometimes light years hence, in apogee ... at other times as one, but ... always the ellipse - the oval - drawn and held, invisibly ever a shimmering pulse, resplendent and a trembling certainty a beautiful and keen prospect set adrift in the azure expanse of US age, distance, actualities, time all but swells in the surf and LOVE ... our eternal compass. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Age Doesn't Matter When You're In Love" Poetry Contest, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/8/2018 5:50:00 PM
Age is only a number, and love beats in every heart. And- that thought alone is enough to wrap around me and my heart. Your words truly hold me. Like the sea touches sand- again and again. The way you express these moments, these emotions. I am captivated. This is Perfect in every way possible. I can see why this got first place. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/8/2018 8:13:00 PM
You are very kind, Brandy, and this comment means a lot to me ... I can tell, by your carefully placed words, that what you say is heartfelt, and in this world of cut-and-paste, sincerity is a rare thing. I am so pleased that this touched your heart, because it is a piece of mine, and one that bares much of my soul. Though I haven't known you long, I feel you and I speak a similar language, and I mean the language that is BEYOND words ... that innate connection is a precious thing. Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/23/2017 9:03:00 AM
An extraordinary poem
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/23/2017 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Faruq - I greatly appreciate the kind comment, my friend! :-)
Date: 12/19/2017 12:46:00 PM
Quite extraordinary, far more than a 'love poem'-- it is a lyrical exegesis on that mystery of a 'true marriage', where 2 strangers come together in that undefinable, unprovable thing we call love and create a 3rd being, a being that can transcend time, space, and even death. You have caught, my friend, the ineffable quality of profound love, and just made me realize it may be God's greatest gift-- to give us a taste of divinity, for there is no other species that can love as we can.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:14:00 PM
I can't thank you enough for this extraordinary and heart-felt comment, LJ, it really blew me away and made my week. Seriously, this put a smile on my face after a very long week, and I am so thankful that you took the time to be so kind and careful ... blessings and thanks to you, my good friend! :-)
Date: 12/19/2017 2:12:00 AM
An exciting poem! Congrats, Gregory, on your win:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:12:00 PM
Very kind of you, Ram ... thank you, friend! :-)
Date: 12/18/2017 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Gregory!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3
Date: 12/18/2017 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations babe :) hugs!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dear One ... blessings! <3
Date: 12/18/2017 12:16:00 PM
Hi Gregory, I see why you often place high in the contest. You are an excellent writer. I'm glad you tweaked it and was able to finish the write. Apt for the contest and much more. Congrats on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/22/2017 1:10:00 PM
That's so very sweet of you, Alexis, and I am very thankful for your lovely comment! Blessings and thanks to you, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 12/18/2017 9:20:00 AM
Absolutely both adorable and amazing. Thanks for sharing this great piece. I shall save it on my word processor. Congrats my friend for your well deserved top spot.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:09:00 PM
Oh, thanks so much, Curtis, that's very kind of you, Buddy ... I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings to you! :-)
Date: 12/18/2017 8:30:00 AM
so beautiful dear poet! I love it...congrats on your top placement! :) -luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:08:00 PM
Very sweet of you, Luloo ... thank you so very much, Friend! <3
Date: 12/18/2017 8:14:00 AM
Well deserved win, Greg. You've given us a wonderful tone and use precise vocabulary and vivid imagery to bring it all alive. Be proud of this, great job. Dave
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, David, that's very kind of you my friend ... blessings to you!
Date: 12/18/2017 7:53:00 AM
Greg, let me be the first to congratulate you on your first place win. What a wonderful expression of love!!! Wish I had said it that well, but a third place win is a tremendous boon to me. Congrats, my friend!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:06:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Curtis, and congratulations on your placement, my friend, that is awesome ... you're starting to get the recognition you deserve ... it will happen more-and-more, trust me! Blessings, Brother! :-)
Date: 12/17/2017 8:24:00 PM
Come with me sea of love was an actual song. Why should you sit, stall and then pout; Pick out subject and write poem about; Words are flowing, And number growing; A success you will be without a doubt.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2017 9:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, James, such a wonderfully poetic comment, my friend ... yes, I am very familiar with that old song, and Steve Miller revived it on a 70's album of his as well. Blessings to you!
Date: 12/15/2017 10:20:00 AM
"Age, distance, actualities, time...All but swells in the surf...MAGNIFICENT.....the whole of this beautiful poem passes thru the funnel of that line......
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, I'm so pleased you liked it ... very kind of you, my friend! Blessings! :-)

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